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Ye Olde Antique

It may be dusty, gross or reek;
It’s sure to sell if it’s antique.

For Susan’s Antique contest

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Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/18/2014 5:03:00 AM

great couplet that captures this theme excellently Jack congrats on win hugs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 5/17/2014 4:54:00 AM

Wow such a great couplet Jack ! Really worth a top wonderful win ! Congrats !

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 5/17/2014 3:56:00 AM

concise but simply splendid!!! CONGRATULATIONS jack.. :D! GBU FROM olive.. :)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/17/2014 2:39:00 AM

Simply Superb! A well deserved winner! Hugs jan x

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/17/2014 1:14:00 AM

Dear Jack, Love this little couplet and am so delighted you took first place! Hugs to you, dear friend. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/16/2014 10:38:00 PM

succinctness at its best. CONGRATS on a well deserved win.

Seren Roberts

Date: 5/16/2014 9:33:00 PM

wd Jack that's great....Seren

Paul Callus

Date: 5/16/2014 6:18:00 PM

Congrats on a witty write Jack! // paul

Skat A

Date: 5/16/2014 5:10:00 PM

awesome win my friend.....SKAT

Faye Gibson

Date: 5/16/2014 3:50:00 PM

So good... Love it. Congratulations!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/16/2014 11:35:00 AM

Oh You! Funny and original and so true. Congrats...Im glad she put your first. BG

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/16/2014 10:15:00 AM

And your antiques can be really old. Congratulations on your win. I see some in our shops that are hardly older than I. Love Joyce

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/16/2014 10:06:00 AM

Good one !!! Isn't that the truth ! :) Congrats to you!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/21/2014 6:18:00 PM

Reads like a winner with humor..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visits..Sara

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/20/2014 9:38:00 PM

Like the cliche, "Good things come in small packages", there should be one that goes, "Valuable things may come aged and covered with dust " LOL! My best wishes for a win, Jack. But then you never need best wishes as you are that good, always! xxAnnalise

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/13/2014 2:56:00 PM

well done, jack..always a witty man you are!.. you haven;t lost your poetic charm... wishing for your win in you recent endeavor.. huggs

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/13/2014 11:22:00 AM

OMG, you always crack me up, Jack! This is adorable and sure to place high in the contest. Love you, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2014 8:16:00 PM

hahaha. You are always clever. why the heck can't I think up this stuff and then the contest would not seem so hard to me!!! hey thanks my friend for giving me so many comments on my poems today. You are the BEST