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We are in Xanadu. A million lights are dancing and there you are, a shooting star. An everlasting world and you're here with me, eternally Xanadu. BY "JEFF LYNNE"
"Xanadu," "Nirvana," and "Utopia" pop to mind This ideal, flawless universe is so entwined Utterly nothing, and nobody, is horrendous We merit success and remain stupendous. Rough Neanderthal had an ideal life in Xanadu There is tangible evidence that the drift grew Youthful synergy would be vast if it were true Impugn if he knew an odd breed of kangaroo. No fighting, no wars, and no fists hoisted No one shall yell, or words to be twisted However, a longing sigh has just been heard "Love" is no extra than a doss four-letter word. There can't be peacemakers without strife No therapies are doable if we live a mild life There is no strengthening through adversity There is no xenial appreciation or empathy. You had to tell people you were in Xanadu Yet, like a swaying tree, distress close drew Without misery, there is no room for kindness We bear no solace or getaway, only blindness. Without failings, there would be no people Still, we need humans, not a tree or a steeple Utterly unfit to uphold virtues and reach purity Simply wishes to swap impunity for security. 1st place contest winner Written: April 27, 2023 Writing Challenge - Words With 'X' - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 5/5/2023 1:11:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest ... a great poem, Las :) - hugs
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Date: 5/4/2023 8:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/picture. Love It.  Have a great/blessed day...............
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Date: 5/4/2023 6:30:00 AM
Sotto, thank you so much for sharing your excellent poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations. I love the image, quote and enjoyed the video too !
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Date: 5/3/2023 9:46:00 PM
Hi Lasaad, I echo what Vijay said. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/3/2023 9:15:00 PM
Words of wisdom You said a lot in this poem, Readers read most important stuff. Congratulations on your great win in the Contest...my friend.
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Date: 5/3/2023 8:44:00 PM
Back to your poem with Congratulations on your well deserved first place win, dear Lasaad.
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Date: 4/28/2023 5:26:00 AM
Beams of inspiration throughout my friend. Well packed with wisdom words. Best to you, Lasaad.
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Date: 4/27/2023 8:40:00 PM
Adversity alone brings forth our strength. A flawless universe is no where to be found. There is no Xanadu or Utopia. We have to grapple with problems and difficulties and through the fire of adversity get purified. Great poem. All the best in the contest.
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