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                  Posted 22nd November 2023.

"Do we impose restrictions on painters as to what colors they may use, and how many brush strokes they may apply? " ~~The poet~~ Is there anyone out there that feels the way I do? I don’t want to be restricted by words too many or too few. I get annoyed when I have to remove an important word. Because it has too many syllables. How absurd! My poem becomes a skeleton of itself. With all the good phrases being left on the shelf. My poem was complete but experienced defeat. The number of lines totaled thirty-two. Only allowed thirty, what was I to do? Do I take two lines from the beginning, the middle or end? I’ve decided what to do, no more messing, I’ll take them from the end and keep them guessing.

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Date: 1/5/2024 2:29:00 AM
Love it!
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Date: 1/5/2024 5:56:00 AM
Thanks so much for reading and commenting Terry, it means a lot to me.
Date: 11/23/2023 11:17:00 AM
Nice penning Wendy, good rhyme and flow with good imagery too. Well done! Take care, Gordon
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Date: 11/25/2023 10:33:00 AM
Thanks very much Gordon.
Date: 11/22/2023 8:47:00 PM
keep them guessing indeed, throw your words into the universe, and the rest be damned! (nicely said ;)) and keep them coming
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Date: 11/25/2023 10:34:00 AM
Thanks Mat.. cheers
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