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Wrong Again

I had never seen anything more beautiful. The scape of it was snow white and as light as clouds. The golden heat might of undone a lesser man but not me. Let it burn baby let it burn. This desert was the most beautiful sight I had ever witnessed. No one ever told me  there were flowers in a desert. I wondered what was underneath if you got through that blanket of... I imagined a chocolate raspberry mousse. Was I hallucinating? Maybe but who cared. All my senses were alive. I could smell it. I could touch it. Now I wanted to taste it. The whip cream, the flaming Grand Marnier, the velvet textured... What? Desert has a double "s". You mean Dessert. ..........ahhhh ****!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/17/2014 12:57:00 PM
WOW, you are amazing. I kind of knew you were talking about dessert. Because you are very sneaky,...LOL... so I read from the bottom up, then I read from the top to bottom... :) so.... hehehe, to whoever does not get it.... Ahhhhh $hit! LINDA
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Date: 9/16/2014 8:03:00 AM
Obviously the same rules should apply to writing poetry as apply to food shopping. Never do it if you're hungry. Thanks for the chuckle. Now I have to go find something for desert....errr...dessert.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/16/2014 5:17:00 PM
thank you for dropping in I appreciate the support.
Date: 9/16/2014 2:11:00 AM
Loved it Maurice......Seren
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/16/2014 2:31:00 PM
thank you Seren.
Date: 9/16/2014 12:50:00 AM
LOl I do love your humourous writes best of all Maurice - chocolate mouse or mousse of course missing the double s you just failed to mention that bit - i know your style now - that had me laughing :-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/16/2014 2:19:00 PM
i fixed the word after i realised it also spelt mouse, just my luck, rats!
Date: 9/16/2014 12:38:00 AM
ahahaha Maurice! you never fail to make me haha! for me, it's a win!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/16/2014 2:16:00 PM
happy you liked it.
Date: 9/15/2014 10:53:00 PM
hahahahaha. I LOVE your humor. I guessed less than halfway down what you were doing!! I would give you the win!!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/16/2014 12:03:00 AM
Thank you. I think I fixed the early tell. I think now the reader will kick in three quarters through which is where it should happen.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/15/2014 11:50:00 PM
Hello Andrea, it is always nice when you visit.

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