Written Like a True Six-Year-Old

Their flesh is ooey
    Their soft places gooey

  Little boys say phooey
     to girls and chop suey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Romios Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 2:08 PM
I liked the second monorhyme best Pangie
Wolf Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 7:22 PM
You mean soft and gooey is not for you?! (Gross, aren't I?!) :)
Flood Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 3:24 PM
Ahhh… that’s where I went wrong. When I was the chase-ee(?) in kiss-chase at school, I should have said phooey instead of coo-ee…. Still… I did get kissed a lot. What a fun write GW, like it lots. Terry
Wolf Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 7:30 PM
With a nuzzle like yours, Terry, I can imagine how many kisses you got! lol. ~ Woof, woof
Kingston Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 2:28 PM
And "phooey" to broccoli too, I bet :( This is so cute, so true and so funny. Just loved it!
Wolf Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 7:30 PM
Thanks for the love on this one, Marikate. :)
Lawless Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 12:33 PM
the chop suey was probably older than the kid
Wolf Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 7:30 PM
Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha. That eliminates one soft spot, I guess. lol.
Rhymer Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 7:39 AM
An aquired taste my friend.
Wolf Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 7:29 PM
Oooh. Sharp comment, Vickey!!
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