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Premiere Contest WinnerWriting Words Gossamer

 
my words are gossamer, diaphanous    
                 and wispy
         my lines    cobwebs of chiffon
I pen in blood ink 
     sublime are my      thoughts
rapturous       I write into the night
     turning words into poetry
from deep within            I pull emotions
   bleeding, bleeding from my pen . . . 
is my     brokenness        and eternal
                      grief . . . 
slowly, I remove the red soaked dagger
    from my heart 
              and the pain is dripping, dripping
and the pieces of my heart lay
    beneath my pen . . . like shards of glass
but, I use every shattered fragment                
      all those pieces     that are me
                    and in time                    
I have used each piece      each one  
   for I have found a strength
         unfathomable . . . in writing

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July 04, 2022


Poetry/Free Verse/writing words gossamer
Copyright Protected, ID 07-1471-646-04
All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France 

Written for the Premiere contest, A Brian Strand Premiere Choice
sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 07/06/2022

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kauffman Avatar
July 8, 2022 at 9:34 AM
Constance, sending you congratulations for your win. Your words emote such pain with striking images yet there is that shout of hope that lives in your poems. Wonderfully done! Blessings.
La France Avatar
July 10, 2022 at 4:45 AM
Sam, thank you so much for the congratulations, comment and compliment, blessings ~Constance
Peck Avatar
July 8, 2022 at 7:15 AM
Dear Constance ~ your poem is so poignant and lovely! And, yes, there is much solace in writing.
La France Avatar
July 10, 2022 at 4:46 AM
Ann, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem, blessings ~Constance
Alex Avatar
July 7, 2022 at 8:12 AM
Such a beautiful picture! Congratulations!
La France Avatar
July 10, 2022 at 4:46 AM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings ~Constance
George Avatar
July 7, 2022 at 3:02 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win with this gem of a poem as delicate and as beautiful as a dew studded gossamer web
La France Avatar
July 10, 2022 at 4:47 AM
Valsa, thank you for the congratulations and the compliment, blessings ~Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 12:49 PM
Congratulations on well deserved first place win! Your writing is impeccable!
La France Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 9:44 PM
Kim, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment, blessings ~Constance
Alex Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 10:16 AM
You seem greatest of poets. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 9:45 PM
Chrituraj, thank you so much for that nice compliment on my writing and the congratulations, blessings ~Constance
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