Writing: My All-Consuming Obsession

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Oh, I have this inescapable preoccupation, since a child wrapped in pleasing delusions and intense words; I am haunted- possessed with a single-minded fixation, writing in solitude while listening to morning birds. Since a child wrapped in pleasing delusions and intense words, tormented and restless and sometimes a bit excessive; writing in solitude while listening to morning birds, penning even into the night- my need to write obsessive. Tormented and restless and sometimes a bit excessive, fanatical- I get immersed and submerged in my thoughts; penning even into the night- my need to write obsessive, this addictive mania has my heart and soul in knots. Fanatical- I get immersed and submerged in my thoughts, my need a bewitchment and a beautiful melancholy; this addictive mania has my heart and soul in knots, It is for the story- this depth of deep frantic folly. My need a bewitchment and a beautiful melancholy, I am haunted- possessed with a single-minded fixation; It is for the story, this depth of deep frantic folly, Oh, I have this inescapable preoccupation. ______________________________ July 22, 2017 Pantoum/Writing: My All-Consuming Obsession Copyright Protected, ID 922376 Written for the contest, Obsession sponsor, Silent One First Place

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Date: 8/5/2017 8:34:00 PM
I like your writing style...the words come alive...enjoyed it...Have a good night
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Date: 7/29/2017 4:32:00 PM
Wonderful obsession and wonderful write, BW - big congrats!
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Date: 7/27/2017 10:10:00 AM
This is fantastic BW! So smooth. Congratulations on your win! - Dean
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Date: 7/27/2017 6:08:00 AM
A wonderful pantoum that rhymes and flows very well.. You do this form with such ease.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 7/23/2017 5:29:00 PM
Wow,,, a nice written Pantoum, Broken Wings, the emotion is deep... luck in the contest.... ~*
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Date: 7/23/2017 9:33:00 AM
What a perfect form for Obsession, very well written BW, best wishes for the contest...
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Date: 7/22/2017 10:24:00 PM
Hi Broken Wings, I love Pantoums and this one is so obsessively exquisite that I had to read it over and over and save as a fav! An absolute beauty. Good luck!! :)
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Date: 7/22/2017 8:27:00 AM
Broken Wings, you have really done a great one here. I can also relate to it, having written since childhood, but I wish you best wishes in the contest and I hope it does well. :)
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