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Waking torment Release me! I struggle to get free Tethered loosely Hope within painful grasp Ease off then thrash about

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Date: 8/15/2023 5:14:00 AM
..."writhing in spasmodic coercion"...I once used that line in a poem. You nailed it DD!!
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Date: 8/15/2023 6:08:00 AM
Haha thanks John, I was feeling somewhat flippant at the time but it's fairly on the money really
Date: 8/14/2023 3:45:00 PM
i wish you will succeed, emotionnal reading i enjoyed, thanks
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Date: 8/14/2023 9:56:00 PM
Thanks Yann - it was a late night W contest entry. I may rethink but thank you :)

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