Write At You...

hey baby…
i’m here just behind your ear
my whispering heat, your dare

”…come to me…” you said

and i learned the universe
just so i could.
don’t turn your head
I AM right behind
i’m the tickle that you feel
in the back of your mind
my hands message your spine
and i’m coming around
my scent locks your legs
and apart on the ground
sensual sends to your knees
the breeze .freeze. and glance down
passionate eyes become wet sound…
the ghosts of listening lips surround
your body at the hips and burns
...i can feel you hear
sweet on my tongue.
the taste of us is
a drop of my pen
hard at attention
our bodies motion
pulsing with ache
i write to a vision
can you feel…
we’re about submission.
darling. ;)~ hard
on target
and charming
teasing at your skin
i’m nibbling
pleasing with a grin
i’m licking
and lookin’…
Write At You.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 12/13/2009 8:45:00 PM
Hey girlfriend.. pass me the info on your other site please... tell u whats been happening via yahoo mail... "Sweetie"
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Date: 11/29/2009 2:24:00 PM
on point as always Izzy. pea's and love
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Date: 11/27/2009 11:52:00 PM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Izzy.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/27/2009 9:50:00 AM
U have been on my mind all morning and now I know why... bravo.. great accomplishment your own site.. I was looking into the very same thing last week. maybe u can give me some pointers via Soup Mail... to begin the process... my son is a computer whiz but not when it comes to creating my own site... legal jargon and all that good stuff.. good luck and success with it ... will check out sometime today... talk later.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/26/2009 8:57:00 AM
Hey,Izzy! I've just had to fan myself, very passionate!!! great write and a joy to read! love Simone
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Date: 11/24/2009 11:57:00 AM
Congrats, girlfriend on your featured poem this week on the Soup... great talent.. great poetry... luv.. "Sweetie"
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Date: 11/23/2009 1:36:00 PM
Izzy, what a most beautiful piece, full of tender emotion leading to love and passion, mmmm >> James
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Date: 11/21/2009 6:55:00 AM
Pheeeewww....! Got me sweatin' in November! Good thing it's not summer (heat-stroke for sure!) - Tim
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Date: 11/18/2009 12:29:00 PM
Thank you for starting my new day out with some excellent reading Izzy. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/17/2009 9:21:00 PM
Cute...enjoyed reading tonight...Marty
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Date: 11/17/2009 5:07:00 PM
Such a touching and romantic write dear friend,...filled with emotions many long to read over and over who crave touch,..well writen my poetic friend !!!! james
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Date: 11/17/2009 2:51:00 PM
hey baby, .. ghosts of listening lips... your body at the hips and burns... OK where is this happening? what a passionate poem from a passionate lady ... immense imagery on this HOT write... ask Doris if the donuts are "fat free" ... splenda in coffee .. its all good ... glad u loved and fav'd Poetry and ME .. will be sending u soup mail some time tonight... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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