Wrapped In Pain

Wrapped in Pain

Oh, night when naught but life contained death’s toy.
As heated new obscenities were strewn,  
And empty bottles like forgotten dreams
Withdrew the spirit from its sullen shroud.
Then, poisoned any hope with great distress.
Imprisoned empty pledges groaning, cold--
And thoughts eschewing, loosing, soon displayed:
A never-ending hurt that cried alone.
And sallow faces wreathing dirty floors.
Another ache embraces hearts that bear
The royal pain that emptiness has crowned
Enthroned by spirits drowning life again. 

© Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
February 15, 2010

Poetic form: Blank verse
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 6:07 PM
You did great, Dane ann.Congratulaions!!
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February 18, 2010 at 10:09 PM
very emotional. it's really hard to understand one's feelings, no matter how much people say "I understand your current situation" etc. Only the one who goes through can actually understand the pain and surge of emotions. this is really beautiful...keep writing.... i like your poetry and your amazing style.
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February 17, 2010 at 9:39 PM
I found this quite dark and emotional. written in this difficult form it emanates an aura of despair. To make the reader feel a strong emotion is a gift. well written....Margaret
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February 17, 2010 at 4:44 PM
The emotion comes thought y our words in a powerful way in this poem. Congratulations on placing fifth in Deborah's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing! Karen
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February 17, 2010 at 4:38 PM
Congratulations on this winning poem, Dane ann! A great piece in a difficult contest! ~ Love, Carrie
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February 17, 2010 at 4:15 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on your winning poem in the Mission Impossible contest.. a wonderful write and well deserved win for an amazing lady.. luv. ... Linda-Marie..
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February 17, 2010 at 3:42 PM
Great job on this difficult task. Congratulations. Joyce
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