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Wrangle of the Cell

"i carry your heart with me(i carry it in my heart)i am never without it(anywhere i go you go . . . " ee Cummings
the wrangle of the cell (the cell that you own) touches me in places (warm and tenderly the tinderbox explodes) my ear — a flame of agrabah (flying tendrils of jasmine rejoice) riveting revelations of love shared serendipitously, moving, even sweetheart, over the ebb and flow of sensuous oceans (keeping us apart) yet; close are we. . . the wrangle of the cell (the cell that you own) touches me in places (warm and tenderly the tinderbox; explodes)
“warm and cozy, our toes curled together, in two different worlds” 11/14/2019 Writing Challenge, November- Some Kind of Love Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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Date: 12/27/2019 8:00:00 PM
Hi Kim, I never saw this beautiful pen, until today. It is breathtaking. You a master with words, emotions, beauty, humanity and soul. Panagiota x
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/27/2019 9:41:00 PM
Thank you so much, my sweet friend!
Date: 11/19/2019 9:53:00 PM
Many congratulations on your winning placement:-) hugs eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/19/2019 10:51:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 11/19/2019 1:53:00 AM
Hi Kim well done on your win
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/19/2019 8:43:00 AM
Thank you, Greg!
Date: 11/18/2019 9:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!;)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2019 10:06:00 PM
Thanks, Brenda!
Date: 11/18/2019 4:25:00 PM
Kim congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful and creative poem !
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/27/2019 8:03:00 PM
You did well in choosing Kim. She is one of the maestros of poetry here and should have hundreds of readers! I can't hold a candle to her luminous pen!! Panagiota
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2019 6:33:00 PM
Thank you, Constance!
Date: 11/18/2019 1:54:00 PM
- Congratulations on a lovely 2nd place in the contest, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2019 6:32:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 11/14/2019 11:42:00 AM
i love this, so unique and well crafted... even when apart always near in heart... beautiful entry for the contest :) hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2019 5:53:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra!
Date: 11/14/2019 10:31:00 AM
This was perfect Kim. Not only does it capture the feelings in the poetic quote above but you also wrote this wonderfully in the creative style of cummings. Nicely done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2019 10:41:00 AM
Thank you for the lovely compliment, my friend! <3 Kim

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