Kim Rodrigues Poet Free verse

Wrangle of the Cell

"i carry your heart with me(i carry it in
my heart)i am never without it(anywhere
i go you go . . . "
                                   ee Cummings


the wrangle of the cell (the cell
that you own) touches me in places (warm
and tenderly the tinderbox explodes)

                                my ear —
a flame of agrabah (flying tendrils of 
jasmine rejoice) riveting revelations of love
shared serendipitously, moving,
even sweetheart, over the ebb
and flow of sensuous oceans (keeping
us apart)
yet; close are we. . .

the wrangle of the cell (the cell
that you own) touches me in places (warm
and tenderly the tinderbox; explodes)


“warm and cozy, our toes curled together, in two different worlds”

11/14/2019

Writing Challenge, November- Some Kind of Love 

Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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Panagiota Romios December 27, 2019 at 8:00 PM Hi Kim, I never saw this beautiful pen, until today. It is breathtaking. You a master with words, emotions, beauty, humanity and soul. Panagiota x Kim Rodrigues December 27, 2019 at 9:41 PM Thank you so much, my sweet friend!

Eve Roper November 19, 2019 at 9:53 PM Many congratulations on your winning placement:-) hugs eve Kim Rodrigues November 19, 2019 at 10:51 PM Thank you, Eve!

Na Na November 19, 2019 at 1:53 AM Hi Kim well done on your win Kim Rodrigues November 19, 2019 at 8:43 AM Thank you, Greg!

Brenda Chiri November 18, 2019 at 9:15 PM Congratulations on your win!;) Kim Rodrigues November 18, 2019 at 10:06 PM Thanks, Brenda!

Constance La France November 18, 2019 at 4:25 PM Kim congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful and creative poem ! Panagiota Romios December 27, 2019 at 8:03 PM You did well in choosing Kim. She is one of the maestros of poetry here and should have hundreds of readers! I can't hold a candle to her luminous pen!! Panagiota Kim Rodrigues November 18, 2019 at 6:33 PM Thank you, Constance!

Anne-Lise Andresen November 18, 2019 at 1:54 PM - Congratulations on a lovely 2nd place in the contest, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kim Rodrigues November 18, 2019 at 6:32 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Sandra Adams November 14, 2019 at 11:42 AM i love this, so unique and well crafted... even when apart always near in heart... beautiful entry for the contest :) hugs Kim Rodrigues November 14, 2019 at 5:53 PM Thank you, Sandra!

Chris Green November 14, 2019 at 10:31 AM This was perfect Kim. Not only does it capture the feelings in the poetic quote above but you also wrote this wonderfully in the creative style of cummings. Nicely done. Kim Rodrigues November 14, 2019 at 10:41 AM Thank you for the lovely compliment, my friend! <3 Kim