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This poem is a repost. I originally posted it the first week I came to PSoup. It received no comments. I chose to repost it because it is one of my personal favorite poems, and it deals w/a significant social issue. I hope my beloved PSoup family give me some feedback the second time around. Love, Romantic Warrior It was a miserable existence, that of a battered wife It was a never ending cycle of a hurt-filled violent life She walked on eggshells, avoided direct eye contact Did nothing that would get him riled up She always spoke in a timid voice, deferred on every household decision Never complained when the sex was too rough Ofttimes it wasn’t even her that would get his pot boiling Get him steamed and hopping mad It could be the telly news, the neighbor’s cat Or the photo of his mum and dad It was a daily chore, washing away the pain that was mixed in with the bloodstains It was a daily chore, rinsing away the tears that was mixed in with the whiskey and beers And each night before turning out the light, she has to take her dose of verbal abuse Then tiredly arise with swollen, sullen eyes; rehearse to neighbors another recycled excuse And for a few hours she gets to enjoy a quiet space that is blissfully sweet Escape in soap daydreams before she faces the daily grind of wash, rinse, repeat

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/19/2017 4:24:00 PM
Freddie, your writing emits the pain I thought could only be felt by the victim! Your pen proved me wrong as your raw emotional ink flowed in poetic brilliance! 7. My best, chuck
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Date: 5/19/2017 2:41:00 PM
Your words speak with the power of suffering, your mind set flows onto the page and we can relate with you and where your words lead us. A somewhat surreal over the edge mixture of emotions that speak of discontentment, abuse and fear. Your words take the reader to your private place where the shame and anger of an abused life is fresh and painful. Emile. #7
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 5/19/2017 3:08:00 PM
Ty, Emile. Your strong words of support means the world to me. Much love to you, bro.

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