Would You Still Love Me 2018

If I told the winds
How much you love me
And quickly spread the news
Blushing your horizon,
Revealing our secret
To whole wide world
Before you could brief
Your own aspirations,
Would you still love me?

If I convinced the stars
To follow you around
As you spoke to the moon
Lovingly about us;
And if they told me
Your inner most thoughts
Before you got a chance
To consult your heart,
Would you still love me?

If my night sent you
A sensuous message
Arousing your dawn
With romantic feelings
Awakening you in
An enchanting dream
Before you were ready
To feel this way,
Would you still love me?

If I swept you off your feet
With pledges of my love
And carried you with me
To cherubic heaven
For a blessed evening
In the Garden of Eden;
And then if I forgot
The way back home,
Would you still love me?

December 9, 2018
Placed 3rd in Would you still love me contest by Edward Ibeh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 9/14/2023 6:45:00 PM
Big congrats, Vijay
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Date: 9/13/2023 1:12:00 PM
Nice to see you had an older poem which went with the theme... your poem is full of romantic yearnings... Thanks for writing and congratulations on your placement.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/13/2023 1:48:00 PM
Something went wrong, SO. I wrote a new poem dated 9/2. Didn't realize the old one had the same title (except that new poem has a question mark at the end of the title). If you have time read the new poem please. Many thanks my friend, for sponsoring contests.
Date: 12/26/2018 12:06:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Vijay! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/12/2019 8:00:00 AM
Thank you Heidi.
Date: 12/25/2018 10:24:00 PM
Congratulations Vijay, on this win. Beautiful words from your heart. ~ Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/12/2019 8:00:00 AM
Thank you Brandy.
Date: 12/25/2018 4:31:00 PM
Hi Vijay, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on you placement in the contest. It was well was deserved. Merry Christmas my friend:-) Alexis
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/12/2019 8:00:00 AM
Thank you Alexis.
Date: 12/25/2018 12:06:00 PM
Thank you for taking part in my contest, Vijay!:-) Very well-written poem! Congratulations on your win, and Merry Christmas to you!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/12/2019 7:59:00 AM
Thank you Edward.
Date: 12/25/2018 11:43:00 AM
Stopping back with congratulations, Vijay. You are such a talented writer and your words touch my heart. Hugs, Carolyn
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/12/2019 7:59:00 AM
Thank you Carolyn.
Date: 12/20/2018 5:00:00 AM
this sang golden in its entire contents vijay i pray you have a blessed week
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/20/2018 3:16:00 PM
Thank you Liam.
Date: 12/14/2018 8:10:00 AM
Such a lovely poem with a great flow. I enjoyed it. Reads like a winner.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/14/2018 12:32:00 PM
Thank you Supraja..appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 12/14/2018 4:50:00 AM
I get the feeling that this lovely poem would work well when set to music. Have you considered that? It has a certain flow about it that seems to bleed its own musical notes. Well done.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/14/2018 7:26:00 AM
It will take an artist like you my friend to work your magic to set this to music. Don't know anything about how to do that. I appreciate your kind thoughts. Many thanks as always. What does M stand for? Wish I knew so I could refer to you by your first name.
Date: 12/14/2018 4:20:00 AM
Hi Vijay, such a beautiful, captivating write that does flow from your pen. After reading this poetic gem Vijay, how could she not love you? Your heart sings in such a true way onto the page my friend. From beginning to end this piece does captivate the heart. Your poetry sings my friend. A fave. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/14/2018 7:22:00 AM
I am guessing you were away..hope you had a wonderful time. Many thanks for your generous feedback. Always appreciate your supportive comments, Mike.
Date: 12/14/2018 12:32:00 AM
Magnificent...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/14/2018 7:20:00 AM
Thank you Pashang.
Date: 12/13/2018 7:49:00 PM
Waiting for more new poems, Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/14/2018 7:20:00 AM
Coming soon..many thanks Andrea.
Date: 12/13/2018 6:54:00 PM
Enjoyed reading, Vijay, you have a way of painting a beautiful poem. Have a very Merry Christmas. Good luck in the contest..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/14/2018 7:19:00 AM
Appreciate the visit and kind remarks..many thanks Eve.
Date: 12/13/2018 3:46:00 PM
vijay, hope you are good... huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/14/2018 7:18:00 AM
Thank you, nette.
Date: 12/12/2018 8:16:00 PM
Lovely expressions of love wonder-ment, touching and well expressed in such unique fashion; these are no ordinary, average wonderments, but individualized ones so deeply heart primed. I enjoyed this very much - read it twice. All the best, all the days ... CayCay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/13/2018 7:37:00 AM
Thank you for the generous feedback CayCay..your visit and comments are much appreciated.
Date: 12/12/2018 9:48:00 AM
Beautiful write..Well penned Vijay..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/12/2018 2:54:00 PM
Thank you Joseph.
Date: 12/11/2018 4:35:00 PM
Just reading this wonderful poetry, how could one resist?
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/12/2018 7:18:00 AM
Thank you Harry..appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/11/2018 3:27:00 PM
The wind would carry your poem to the highest of levels where it belongs.. the stars and the moon would lovingly get eclipsed by your work of art.. the night would open his eyes and keep dreaming of a beauty of heart in the "Garden of Eden"! and here I am, overjoyed to read a gem of your creation and honoured to adorn my fave list with it.. dear Vijay, your poetry keeps ascending the ladders of beauty exquisitely! Great poem! A win! My deepest regards.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/11/2018 4:24:00 PM
Thank you for such delightful analysis you presented. I always look forward to your kind feedback..knowing it is always so heartfelt. Regards, Besma.
Date: 12/11/2018 2:22:00 PM
The height of romance you have reached with this powerful expression of love Vijay. A great poem Best in the contest !!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/11/2018 4:22:00 PM
Thank you Mike..really appreciate your kind remarks.
Date: 12/11/2018 12:58:00 PM
With such lovely, romantic words, how could she not still love you, Vijay!! gl in the contest. Regards // paul
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/11/2018 1:07:00 PM
Thank you Paul..appreciate the kind remarks. Regards.
Date: 12/10/2018 6:16:00 PM
wow, Vijay you outdid yourself for the contest. Truly one of the most imaginative ones I have seen for this contest.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/11/2018 7:36:00 AM
Thank you Andrea. Always happy to read your kind remarks..much appreciated and valued.
Date: 12/10/2018 5:48:00 PM
WoW! Vijay, I am convinced that she would still love you. Each word and line conveyed the type of love that we all long to have. I am also convinced that you have penned yourself a winner:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/11/2018 7:35:00 AM
Thank you for the wonderful comments..many thanks, Alexis.
Date: 12/10/2018 2:58:00 PM
may tuesday find you well, vijay... huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/10/2018 3:58:00 PM
Happy day to you as well friend (is it Tuesday there already?)
Date: 12/10/2018 1:07:00 PM
WOW! Such a beautiful poem--and creative approach to the prompt, Vijay! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/10/2018 2:47:00 PM
Thank you for the kind remarks Janice..appreciate, as always.
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