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Would You Still Love Me 2018

If I told the winds How much you love me And quickly spread the news Blushing your horizon, Revealing our secret To whole wide world Before you could brief Your own aspirations, Would you still love me? If I convinced the stars To follow you around As you spoke to the moon Lovingly about us; And if they told me Your inner most thoughts Before you got a chance To consult your heart, Would you still love me? If my night sent you A sensuous message Arousing your dawn With romantic feelings Awakening you in An enchanting dream Before you were ready To feel this way, Would you still love me? If I swept you off your feet With pledges of my love And carried you with me To cherubic heaven For a blessed evening In the Garden of Eden; And then if I forgot The way back home, Would you still love me? December 9, 2018 Placed 3rd in Would you still love me contest by Edward Ibeh

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2023 6:45:00 PM

Big congrats, Vijay

Silent One

Date: 9/13/2023 1:12:00 PM

Nice to see you had an older poem which went with the theme... your poem is full of romantic yearnings... Thanks for writing and congratulations on your placement.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/13/2023 1:48:00 PM

Something went wrong, SO. I wrote a new poem dated 9/2. Didn't realize the old one had the same title (except that new poem has a question mark at the end of the title). If you have time read the new poem please. Many thanks my friend, for sponsoring contests.

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/26/2018 12:06:00 PM

Congratulations for your win Vijay! :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/12/2019 8:00:00 AM

Thank you Heidi.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/25/2018 10:24:00 PM

Congratulations Vijay, on this win. Beautiful words from your heart. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/12/2019 8:00:00 AM

Thank you Brandy.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/25/2018 4:31:00 PM

Hi Vijay, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on you placement in the contest. It was well was deserved. Merry Christmas my friend:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/12/2019 8:00:00 AM

Thank you Alexis.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 12/25/2018 12:06:00 PM

Thank you for taking part in my contest, Vijay!:-) Very well-written poem! Congratulations on your win, and Merry Christmas to you!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/12/2019 7:59:00 AM

Thank you Edward.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/25/2018 11:43:00 AM

Stopping back with congratulations, Vijay. You are such a talented writer and your words touch my heart. Hugs, Carolyn

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/12/2019 7:59:00 AM

Thank you Carolyn.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/20/2018 5:00:00 AM

this sang golden in its entire contents vijay i pray you have a blessed week

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/20/2018 3:16:00 PM

Thank you Liam.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 12/14/2018 8:10:00 AM

Such a lovely poem with a great flow. I enjoyed it. Reads like a winner.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/14/2018 12:32:00 PM

Thank you Supraja..appreciate your visit and comments.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/14/2018 4:50:00 AM

I get the feeling that this lovely poem would work well when set to music. Have you considered that? It has a certain flow about it that seems to bleed its own musical notes. Well done.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/14/2018 7:26:00 AM

It will take an artist like you my friend to work your magic to set this to music. Don't know anything about how to do that. I appreciate your kind thoughts. Many thanks as always. What does M stand for? Wish I knew so I could refer to you by your first name.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 12/14/2018 4:20:00 AM

Hi Vijay, such a beautiful, captivating write that does flow from your pen. After reading this poetic gem Vijay, how could she not love you? Your heart sings in such a true way onto the page my friend. From beginning to end this piece does captivate the heart. Your poetry sings my friend. A fave. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/14/2018 7:22:00 AM

I am guessing you were away..hope you had a wonderful time. Many thanks for your generous feedback. Always appreciate your supportive comments, Mike.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 12/14/2018 12:32:00 AM

Magnificent...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/14/2018 7:20:00 AM

Thank you Pashang.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/13/2018 7:49:00 PM

Waiting for more new poems, Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/14/2018 7:20:00 AM

Coming soon..many thanks Andrea.

Eve Roper

Date: 12/13/2018 6:54:00 PM

Enjoyed reading, Vijay, you have a way of painting a beautiful poem. Have a very Merry Christmas. Good luck in the contest..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/14/2018 7:19:00 AM

Appreciate the visit and kind remarks..many thanks Eve.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/13/2018 3:46:00 PM

vijay, hope you are good... huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/14/2018 7:18:00 AM

Thank you, nette.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/12/2018 8:16:00 PM

Lovely expressions of love wonder-ment, touching and well expressed in such unique fashion; these are no ordinary, average wonderments, but individualized ones so deeply heart primed. I enjoyed this very much - read it twice. All the best, all the days ... CayCay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/13/2018 7:37:00 AM

Thank you for the generous feedback CayCay..your visit and comments are much appreciated.

Joseph May

Date: 12/12/2018 9:48:00 AM

Beautiful write..Well penned Vijay..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/12/2018 2:54:00 PM

Thank you Joseph.

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/11/2018 4:35:00 PM

Just reading this wonderful poetry, how could one resist?

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/12/2018 7:18:00 AM

Thank you Harry..appreciate your comments.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 12/11/2018 3:27:00 PM

The wind would carry your poem to the highest of levels where it belongs.. the stars and the moon would lovingly get eclipsed by your work of art.. the night would open his eyes and keep dreaming of a beauty of heart in the "Garden of Eden"! and here I am, overjoyed to read a gem of your creation and honoured to adorn my fave list with it.. dear Vijay, your poetry keeps ascending the ladders of beauty exquisitely! Great poem! A win! My deepest regards.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/11/2018 4:24:00 PM

Thank you for such delightful analysis you presented. I always look forward to your kind feedback..knowing it is always so heartfelt. Regards, Besma.

Mike Gentile

Date: 12/11/2018 2:22:00 PM

The height of romance you have reached with this powerful expression of love Vijay. A great poem Best in the contest !!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/11/2018 4:22:00 PM

Thank you Mike..really appreciate your kind remarks.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/11/2018 12:58:00 PM

With such lovely, romantic words, how could she not still love you, Vijay!! gl in the contest. Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/11/2018 1:07:00 PM

Thank you Paul..appreciate the kind remarks. Regards.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/10/2018 6:16:00 PM

wow, Vijay you outdid yourself for the contest. Truly one of the most imaginative ones I have seen for this contest.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/11/2018 7:36:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. Always happy to read your kind remarks..much appreciated and valued.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/10/2018 5:48:00 PM

WoW! Vijay, I am convinced that she would still love you. Each word and line conveyed the type of love that we all long to have. I am also convinced that you have penned yourself a winner:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/11/2018 7:35:00 AM

Thank you for the wonderful comments..many thanks, Alexis.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/10/2018 2:58:00 PM

may tuesday find you well, vijay... huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/10/2018 3:58:00 PM

Happy day to you as well friend (is it Tuesday there already?)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/10/2018 1:07:00 PM

WOW! Such a beautiful poem--and creative approach to the prompt, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/10/2018 2:47:00 PM

Thank you for the kind remarks Janice..appreciate, as always.