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Would You Love Me If I Weren't a Poet? - Spelling Edit

I tried to read a favorite poem of mine for you. Your eyes glazed over. You could have been a lizard on a rock sunning yourself, entirely unaware that I felt as though I were there in front of you reciting my words of such beauty that an angel could have been singing them while playing on a harp. You may have even fallen quite to sleep. Not once did you look up or glance at me. You told me later, in fact, you had no use for poetry. Another time I tried to read a poem to you. It was a poem meticulously crafted just for you. I could tell you liked it, for you were its centerpiece. You pricked up your ears a little bit. You thanked me, but no sweet words of great appreciate did you return. I am a stranger in your world of pure practicality. Your love for me is steadfast and real; however, asking if you’d love me if I were not a poet is like asking a mother if she’d love her baby if it were not merely there cooing in her lap.

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Date: 9/13/2023 1:40:00 PM
Thanks for writing and congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 9/3/2023 7:48:00 AM
Such a heartfelt write dear Ria... straight from the heart....just came here to read some of your poems and others' after a very long time... Best wishes and hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 9/3/2023 1:34:00 AM
Our poems are like little pieces of us, babies indeed, and to not feel appreciated or acknowledged by the ones that we express for in words can be truly painful. You’ve written about that so very well for the prompt and your words are so poignant and evocative. So touching and so heartfelt. I felt so much as i read this melancholic piece. You are a gifted poet and your words evoke so many emotions as we readers read. So keep writing. And goodluck for the competition.
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Date: 9/2/2023 9:23:00 PM
This is such a heartfelt piece.. It can definitely become aching and saddening when our loved ones, have opposite interpretations and preferences and don't really seem to appreciate our dreamy worlds of liking.. Certainly, can be very hard for a poet, to grasp this.. Challenging truly! I love how you took the contest with a whole profound dimension and weaved a tapestry of evocative depth.. Love this so much!
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Date: 9/2/2023 6:27:00 PM
I truly enjoyed reading your entry, Andrea. It's often challenging when the things we hold dear, or even just find intriguing, go unnoticed or unappreciated by the people we hold close to our hearts.
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Date: 9/2/2023 4:33:00 PM
This must be a contest; I've seen a couple of poems with this title. I liked your entry, Andrea. Sometimes it is difficult when things that are precious or just interesting to us or ignore by those we love. Opposites may attract, but they can be easier to love than to like sometimes. Good luck in the contest! Bill
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Date: 9/2/2023 1:54:00 PM
- I have not fallen asleep ... and I have read every word ... a great poem, Andrea :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs
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Date: 9/2/2023 1:24:00 PM
"Good Luck" on your wonderful write. I enjoyed reading it. I also dd this one. Have a great day/weekend.............
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