''Would You Like To Buy a Bag'' - Plastic

~~~~   "Would You Like To Buy A Bag ? "  ~~~~

Two years ago, to the day
If you needed a bag , you must pay.

A nickle a bag we did charge
Whether its small, whether its large.

The customers were incredulous.
Some were sullen, some caused a fuss.

Some threw things, some would curse,
Some would stuff everything in their purse.

Some loaded their purchases to their chin
As if it were a battle they must win.

You'd think we were crazy, out of our head
Suggesting they use cloth bags instead.

It's been two years, we still hear them say
"Me?...pay for a bag?, that'll be the day"

The landfills and oceans have plastic galore
And courtesy of us, they'll  keep getting more.



for Susan Burch's contest "Paper or Plastic"
my theme - plastic
28/02/2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Allen Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 1:32 PM
From someone who uses cloth bags I applaud this profusely. Well done. I am posting one I wrote called Fatal Beauty that I think runs in this vein.
Bunton Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 6:32 PM
Congratulations!
Johnson Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 5:30 PM
plastic bags i use, theys good, put em under bricks i should, so i don't have ta cut the grass, bricks are hard work just ask... did it yes i should....:)
Richards Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 2:08 PM
I'm back again, Francine, this time to say a big thank you for my placement in your last contest!!! You gave us all a taste of springtime with that delightful theme! Thank you!
Sweetheart Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 8:47 AM
thankxx Francine for honoring my entry as a number one .. am so pleased u enjoyed my composition on daffodills.. thankxx for inspiring us with lovely thoughts and theme luv..
Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 12:11 AM
YOu did very well with your entry, Francine. and I am just now seeing you won with it, so big congrats to you. I love the environmental message. Just saw your comment to me on my win. THANKS so much. I was really inspired by your lovely contest!!!
Devonshire Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 12:23 PM
We all have to do our part to protect our environment. I really like the cloth bags because they can be used over and over without breaking. Your environmental message scores high for me, Francine. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Chircop Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 6:36 AM
A great message .... to all people who ruin the envoirenment we live in..Congrat. dear-Charma
Gorelick Avatar
March 4, 2012 at 7:43 PM
How right you are.! Congrats on your win. BG
Sweetheart Avatar
March 3, 2012 at 10:19 AM
congrats Francine on a wonderful write and win.. bags go for lots more in our stores on East Coast and Italy too..luv.. a stunning write..
Situation Avatar
March 3, 2012 at 9:57 AM
we have stores like that. it irritates me to.
Johnson Avatar
March 3, 2012 at 9:29 AM
Congratulations Francine. It is strange to me that we can't seem to wean ourselves from plastic bags when it is really such a short time since we started using them. I remember the nice useful paper grocery bags very well. Love, Joyce
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 3, 2012 at 5:50 AM
Congratulations Francine a very nice piece xx
A   Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 7:03 PM
Francine... congratulations! In Susan's contest....Enjoyed stopping by to view may winners tonight!! Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
Ronthorpe Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 4:51 PM
Francine, wonderful couplets. Well done. Congrats on making Susan's winners' list.....................S.Ronthorpe
Susan Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 2:09 PM
Congratulations on your win and thanks for supporting my contest! A sad reality that people are so offended by this! and the piles grow...
Brown Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 10:54 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Paper Or Plastic" contest Francine. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 8:38 AM
A great reminder....a great message....we are such a spoiled society as we trash our earth again and again!!Well done, Francine!! Congratulations!
Bauer Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 7:36 AM
so true and very well said!
Flach Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 2:11 PM
Keep trying to save the planet Francine, maybe some day people will start to get it. Terrific write for the contest - I am sure it will be honored with a placement.
Guzzi Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 6:31 AM
You are so right with this write! [PS Have made corrections THANK YOU!] Light & Love
Onclaud Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 3:50 AM
we use a lot of plastic bags for free where i am from, francine.. now, we are finally shifting to paper ones.. a stimulating, socially-inspired read.. am not sure of i thanked you for my slot in your spring contest, so here goes my appreciation for that!.. winning wishes to yuo and huggs! :)
Pettit Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 1:45 AM
There are discount grocery chains where shoppers have to pay extra for bags. I always go to the store with either plastic bags or cardboard boxes and pack the items myself. It's good to see new material from you, Francine. This is a good one with descriptiveness and rhyming.
Roberts Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 11:07 AM
here in Canada we are trying to get away from using plastic so a lot of stores now charge for plastic, not just discount ones, may be too little too late though
Andresen Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 1:38 AM
GOOD ONE, Francine and I am agree with you....not pay for a plastic bag. - oxox love and good luck to you in the contest,hope for a win, Anne-Lise
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