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What If and Would You

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if in one endless moonless night suddenly I might lose my sight would you promise to stand by me and continue to protect me tenderly would you gingerly hold on to me and still call me your sweet baby should I ever abandon all my senses suddenly make a mad run for the fences would you gently cradle and rock me and sing me a sweet soothing melody should I ever succumb to melancholy with somber whims and bouts of folly would you still find it in you to cherish me even remarry me wholeheartedly should I lose all sign of memory and forget everything you meant to me my darling, I’ve never doubted deep in my heart my love for you I’d never want to fall apart we promised to stay by each other’s side forever thru life’s hurdles we’ll ease on down the river AP: 2nd place 2021, 2nd place 2020, 3rd place 2020, Front Page Pick 2020 Submitted on March 7, 2022 for A BRIAN STRAND STRUCTURED contest sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST Originally posted on December 8, 2018

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Date: 12/10/2018 9:18:00 PM
I have to say that this one hit me right in the gut, as I've seen how quickly love can sour when people do … It's not always pretty, and it doesn't always turn out well. Love is often better off when not put to these kind of tests … Much to reflect upon here in this profoundly moving write, Line. Season's best, Gershon
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Date: 12/10/2018 10:56:00 PM
Thank you so much for your most appreciated visit and moving comment, Gershon.
Date: 12/10/2018 1:22:00 PM
Sounds like true love to me - inspiring!
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Date: 12/10/2018 2:02:00 PM
Thanks, Michelle. Most appreciated.
Date: 12/9/2018 8:07:00 PM
Any man would based on these words alone. Great poem!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/9/2018 9:52:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Timothy.
Date: 12/8/2018 12:44:00 AM
I dare say he would do all of these things for you and more.
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Date: 12/8/2018 2:05:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Caren. Most appreciated.

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