Would Not Be Lost (Ekphrasis In Couplet Form)

Moving to the beat of a Spiritual dance
Floating to the grace of a Spiritual trance

Finding our way through a Spiritual door
The creator knows what we are dancing for

To a Spiritual warrior who is a chosen one
Apache Warrior was feared for things he done

They took raping their land as no joke
God knows I truly do admire them folk

Fight fire with fire and instill some fear
Fought for their land they loved so dear

He fought for his land and his way of life
White man slaughtered his children and his wife

Honest people defeated by the white mans lies
Forked tongues with an endless supply of alibi’s

Praise be to the Elders who paid the cost
To ensure their heritage would not be lost

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Inspired by T.C. Cannon's Apache Dancers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/26/2009 8:02:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem..I have a special feeling for native americans..we spend part of our summer on an Indian reservation in northern California..they are trying so hard to hold on to their traditions.
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Date: 5/26/2009 4:25:00 PM
Michael, This poem is beautiful. The big problem between the conquistador's and Native Americans was communication. The Europeans, (Spanish, French, English) had a concept of land ownership, just as we have today. The Native Americans did not understand that concept...thus misunderstood treaties. It is a horrible past. Here's some interesting information. Mesa, Arizona is on land that the Pima Indians were given as part of their reservation. They own the title to it... Thinking, Dane
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Date: 5/26/2009 3:11:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme for an inspirational poem. I really like the last two lines. Blessings to you for sharing your talent with us. Karen
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Date: 5/26/2009 2:11:00 PM
I have Cherokee on my dad's side of the tree.......
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Date: 5/26/2009 1:50:00 PM
The Native Americans had good values. How sad it is we destroyed both their heritage and the land they fought to preserve. Lots of people today still talk with "forked tongues." Excellent poem, Michael! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/26/2009 1:08:00 PM
Wow. There is no stopping you! Incredibly excellent write to go with an amazing painting! It hurts as I read this exceptional couplet, filled with the embarrassing truth of our part in destroying such a beautiful culture. Awesome Ekphrasis! Love, shar
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Date: 5/26/2009 12:44:00 PM
very touching and inspiritual tribute i appreciate the context and flow great write hope you feel better
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Date: 5/26/2009 12:44:00 PM
The Native Americans definitely got the short end of the stick, sad but the way of the world. Braver men never lived. God Bless. Ron
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