Worn Out

Once again, worn out
From the simple act of living
Blown out of all held dear
Waves come and go
Stretching across time and space
A tragic loss here
A triumphant gain there
And still the waves come
Lapping at a shore
That is time itself 
Manifest in a million little grains
Lapping as I lay exhausted 
Too tired to think, too tired to feel
Anything but a sadness
Deeper than time.

(8/23/23)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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September 13, 2023 at 8:53 AM
I understand this and you have expressed it well. I can feel the exhaustion. Well done. Take care :)
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September 13, 2023 at 11:29 AM
Thanks Heidi. I think this level of exhaustion is something we all feel at some point (if we live long enough!), and instead of being a bummer (which it certainly can feel like) is in fact the moment of break-through, or at least an opportunity for something new. Yet, the recognition of 'sadness deeper than time' is something that doesn't ever really go away, but can inform what we then do...
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