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Notes: The top picture is my own painting. September 9, 2022 Autumn (Pantoum) Poetry Contest Syllables checked by HMS.com rhymes checked by rhyme zone.com Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger

yellow, crimson and red gold all around me! wrapped in frenzied emotions fervently I see Autumn has arrived, draped world with colours free bliss of nature, full of wonders every tree! wrapped in frenzied emotions fervently I see petite flowers shivering weave coral dreams bliss of nature, full of wonders every tree! whirling, swirling, twirling, whimsical leaves petite flowers shivering weave coral dreams mystical breeze waltzing, whistling, whispering story, whirling, swirling, twirling, whimsical leaves Life is full of colours, and poignant memory! mystical breeze waltzing, whistling, whispering story, tiny birds chirping, squirrels spurting from nowhere Life is full of colours, and poignant memory! pristine clouds as sailboats floating with no care tiny birds chirping, squirrels spurting from nowhere autumn tiptoes like a blushing bride in veil pristine clouds as sailboats floating with no care sky is singing to me an ebullient tale Autumn tiptoes like a blushing bride in veil in my world feast of astonishing colours I see sky is singing to me an ebullient tale yellow, crimson and red gold all around me!

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Date: 11/8/2022 2:24:00 PM
Love: whirling, swirling, twirling, whimsical leaves & Autumn tiptoes like a blushing bride in veil…Congratulations, Mala!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/8/2022 3:19:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. Delighted to know you enjoyed.
Date: 11/8/2022 10:53:00 AM
Pure autumn delight, dear Mala, dancing through your vibrant and enchanting world colored with striking images and animals! What an exquisite scene you set all within the pages of an autumn story. Congratulations on your win dear friend. Thank you for letting me share your beautiful world! Hugs and much love! So wonderful to have you back in the soup!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/8/2022 3:22:00 PM
Thank you, Dear Sam. I really love the colourful world of Autumn, and I love watching those scurrying squirrels. Sharing with you and the talented poets at this site, is an honour and a pleasure.
Date: 11/8/2022 6:56:00 AM
Congratulations your win Mala!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/8/2022 7:44:00 AM
Thanks, Linda, for your kind visit and comment.
Date: 11/8/2022 5:13:00 AM
I like your writings very much. This is a marvelous work on autumn in pantoum form. Congratulations!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/8/2022 5:17:00 AM
Dear Christuraj, thank you for your encouraging support. It is hard to continue writing without inspiring words from friends and fellow poets. Best wishes ~ Mala
Date: 11/8/2022 3:05:00 AM
Beautiful pantoum, congratulations
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/8/2022 5:15:00 AM
Thanks, Terry. Glad you liked it.
Date: 9/9/2022 12:20:00 PM
Hello Mala, a beautiful season. the leaves are beginning to change colours here to. I love it when mother nature spills her paint box all through her leaves. making a beautiful scene. Love & Friensdship Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/10/2022 10:59:00 AM
Hello Mala, the leaves are just begging to change colours. Love & Friendship Darlene
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/9/2022 3:58:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene. Yes, Autumn is such a beautiful season. I feel mesmerized with the colours of the leaves. Love and Friendship ~ mala

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