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Notes: The top picture is my own painting. September 9, 2022 Autumn (Pantoum) Poetry Contest Syllables checked by HMS.com rhymes checked by rhyme zone.com Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger

World Draped With Colours

yellow, crimson and red gold all around me!
                     wrapped in frenzied emotions fervently I see
                  Autumn has arrived, draped world with colours free
                          bliss of nature, full of wonders every tree!

                     wrapped in frenzied emotions fervently I see
                        petite flowers shivering weave coral dreams
                         bliss of nature, full of wonders every tree!
                      whirling, swirling, twirling, whimsical leaves

                        petite flowers shivering weave coral dreams
                    mystical breeze waltzing, whistling, whispering story,
                     whirling, swirling, twirling, whimsical leaves
                          Life is full of colours, and poignant memory!

                    mystical breeze waltzing, whistling, whispering story,
                   tiny birds chirping, squirrels spurting from nowhere 
                          Life is full of colours, and poignant memory!
                      pristine clouds as sailboats floating with no care

                   tiny birds chirping, squirrels spurting from nowhere
                         autumn tiptoes like a blushing bride in veil
                     pristine clouds as sailboats floating with no care
                            sky is singing to me an ebullient tale

                         Autumn tiptoes like a blushing bride in veil
                       in my world feast of astonishing colours I see
                             sky is singing to me an ebullient tale
                         yellow, crimson and red gold all around me!
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Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2022 at 2:24 PM
Love: whirling, swirling, twirling, whimsical leaves & Autumn tiptoes like a blushing bride in veil…Congratulations, Mala!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 8, 2022 at 3:19 PM
Thank you, Kim. Delighted to know you enjoyed.
Kauffman Avatar
November 8, 2022 at 10:53 AM
Pure autumn delight, dear Mala, dancing through your vibrant and enchanting world colored with striking images and animals! What an exquisite scene you set all within the pages of an autumn story. Congratulations on your win dear friend. Thank you for letting me share your beautiful world! Hugs and much love! So wonderful to have you back in the soup!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 8, 2022 at 3:22 PM
Thank you, Dear Sam. I really love the colourful world of Autumn, and I love watching those scurrying squirrels. Sharing with you and the talented poets at this site, is an honour and a pleasure.
Fowler Avatar
November 8, 2022 at 6:56 AM
Congratulations your win Mala!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 8, 2022 at 7:44 AM
Thanks, Linda, for your kind visit and comment.
Alex Avatar
November 8, 2022 at 5:13 AM
I like your writings very much. This is a marvelous work on autumn in pantoum form. Congratulations!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 8, 2022 at 5:17 AM
Dear Christuraj, thank you for your encouraging support. It is hard to continue writing without inspiring words from friends and fellow poets. Best wishes ~ Mala
Miller Avatar
November 8, 2022 at 3:05 AM
Beautiful pantoum, congratulations
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 8, 2022 at 5:15 AM
Thanks, Terry. Glad you liked it.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 9, 2022 at 12:20 PM
Hello Mala, a beautiful season. the leaves are beginning to change colours here to. I love it when mother nature spills her paint box all through her leaves. making a beautiful scene. Love & Friensdship Darlene
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 10:59 AM
Hello Mala, the leaves are just begging to change colours. Love & Friendship Darlene
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 9, 2022 at 3:58 PM
Thank you, Darlene. Yes, Autumn is such a beautiful season. I feel mesmerized with the colours of the leaves. Love and Friendship ~ mala
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