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World Cruise

What fun it would be to sail on a ship Over all the world on a pleasure trip Riding the waves from shore to shore Landing to browse in shops and stores Daring to find new sights to explore Canary Islands or the South seas Rio de Janeiro, the Hebrides Under the sun you'll cruise with the tide Islands and dolphins on the port side Seeing new lands brings joy to the heart Enlightened by finding all the best parts 10/8/17

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Kim Merryman

Date: 4/18/2021 7:16:00 PM

This makes me want to jump on a cruise ship and take off! Great acrostic, Janis! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Janis Thompson
Date: 4/18/2021 9:24:00 PM

Thanks much Kim for your encouragement and congrats. Continued blessings for you and yours. Janis.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/24/2017 6:46:00 PM

One of the best! Congrats on your win.

Brian Davey

Date: 10/22/2017 2:48:00 PM

Wonderfully light and airy with perfect flow in this Acrostic, congratulations

Roy Pett

Date: 10/18/2017 8:13:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful acrostic Janis, congratulations on your well deserved win. :))

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 10/17/2017 10:14:00 PM

Oh, this is wonderful, Janis - charming and adventurous - loved it! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - keep up the great writing! :-)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/16/2017 10:23:00 PM

EXCELLENT Janis. Congratulations! Janice

Eve Roper

Date: 10/16/2017 4:54:00 PM

I've never been maybe one day... lovely write, Janis, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`*

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/10/2017 8:53:00 AM

Captured the excitement and the essence of a world cruise, Janis:)

Janis Thompson
Date: 10/10/2017 9:46:00 AM

Thanks, Jo. Glad to hear from you.