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We labored hard for decades to provide Our kids good lives. We never hoped to be Rich and prestigious. We were satisfied. Life was fulfilling; closeness was the key. Delights like cruises, we could not afford. Church outings and short trips with family Renewed our spirits; we weren’t often bored. Unknown to our grown kids, we frequently Imagined seeing distant shores--a cruise So grand! Then they brought tickets and good news. Each of us now would see the world’s grand views-- So many lovely places, ours to choose! Date: September 24, 2017 Contest Title: World Cruise Contest (acrostic) Sponsor: Kevin Shaw June 17, 2018, entered in Robert Haigh's Distant Shores Contest

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Date: 6/24/2018 6:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful acrostic. I always enjoy your family oriented poems.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/24/2018 7:05:00 PM
Susan, thank you so much! Janice
Date: 6/22/2018 9:10:00 AM
Great acrostic, Janice. Congratulations:) I never really caught the cruise bug. I've heard way too many horror stories!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/22/2018 9:53:00 AM
Thanks so much, Danny! I've never been on a cruise, but I may--some day. Janice
Date: 10/24/2017 6:40:00 PM
Great story telling. Congrats on your fine win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/24/2017 7:23:00 PM
Thanks so much, Richard! Janice
Date: 10/22/2017 2:41:00 PM
Dreams do come true! Congrats on your win Janice well deserved
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/22/2017 8:00:00 PM
Thanks so much, Brian! Janice
Date: 10/17/2017 10:03:00 PM
This is wonderful, Janice - I really enjoyed the whimsical ride! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - keep up the great writing! :-)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/17/2017 10:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Greg! You're very supportive. Janice
Date: 10/17/2017 8:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Janice, so well written. :))
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/17/2017 8:11:00 AM
Thank you so much, Roy! Janice
Date: 10/17/2017 7:37:00 AM
Back to say congratulations !!!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/17/2017 8:04:00 AM
Thanks so much, Mike. Janice
Date: 10/16/2017 4:47:00 PM
Janice, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/16/2017 9:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve! Janice
Date: 10/16/2017 4:33:00 PM
Congrats Janice :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/16/2017 9:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gary! Janice
Date: 9/25/2017 8:57:00 AM
I really enjoyed your Acrostic, Janice, Good Luck!!!!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/25/2017 9:03:00 AM
Thanks so much, Mike! Janice
Date: 9/25/2017 8:44:00 AM
Great choice for the contest.. Good luck
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/25/2017 9:04:00 AM
Thanks so much, S.O. Janice
Date: 9/24/2017 11:05:00 PM
Feels like the joy of upcoming travel.. you managed this well with rhymes.. good luck for a win Janice!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/25/2017 9:05:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay. This one was a real challenge! Janice

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