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Poetic Form: Quatorzain
Inspired: 2024 January 14
Image: Online Casinos by Pokerfuse

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Before the day turned into night, I had made sure I dressed up right, Wore leather-loose and suede shoes tight, Then, drove my Benz down strips of light. It is Vegas, not like those towns, Get to basics, unlike those clowns, And place those big bets slam 'um downs, All my aces beat all those crowns. I went from GO and passed by jail, All my doe in a golden pail, I went from fish right to a whale, A penthouse suite my holy grail. I paid my debts, I'm free and clear, Live righteous, happy, and sincere.

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Date: 3/28/2024 10:32:00 AM
This is just fun and delightful dear Willian. Roaring down the strip with your words! Congratulations! :)
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Hilo Poet
Date: 3/28/2024 12:50:00 PM
Aw, so encouraging of you, Linda, a wonderful welcoming, my friend. Aloha, William
Date: 3/27/2024 10:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative/fun write. Enjoy your fun day/win..............
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Date: 3/27/2024 10:44:00 AM
Nice of you, Paula, always appreciate your sincerities, my friend. Aloha, William
Date: 3/26/2024 9:15:00 PM
William, what a unique take on the contest. A high roller for sure. Congratulations on your win in my contest! Aloha Charlie
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Date: 3/26/2024 9:30:00 PM
I nearly forgot that I wrote this pirece--too busy with the high-rollers intro in the alley with my new bald-headed friend named, 'Baba'! Mahalo from the next lotto winner, William
Date: 1/14/2024 2:47:00 PM
a descriptive poem about Vegas...I liked what you did here. enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 1/14/2024 2:53:00 PM
As I told Vijay of what Disney said about fairy tales--nobody truly lived happily ever after--eh, Aloha, Sara, William
Date: 1/14/2024 6:07:00 AM
Your poem--a perfect fit for Vegas. Aptly described--your words take the reader to the scene. I like your poem and especially the ending lines.
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Date: 1/14/2024 6:20:00 AM
Tho' it's been some time, I hope to go on a nostalgic run, thanks, Vijay. Disney said he liked fairy tales, because nobody truly live happily ever after. Aloha, William

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