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I thought I caught a sunbeam As the leaves started to fall Scattered colors across the stream Then, there was nothing at all I cannot turn back time to retrieve The smiles you gave me, I wore Just questions, words unsaid, as I grieve What were all those missing years for? Not knowing, what you thought then When I was stolen from life with you Now sitting alone, wondering when The truth will shine in skies of blue Waiting for a sunbeam to reach me To settle a lonely, restless, mind As it moves with the currents I see Words waiting to be heard, left behind Heidi Sands *Not for contest 9/17/17

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Date: 9/22/2017 4:01:00 PM
Beautiful write Heidi..I love the first stanza
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/22/2017 4:04:00 PM
Thank you Joseph. I am happy to hear you like that first Stanza :)
Date: 9/17/2017 4:46:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading this poem the first time you posted it, and reading it again this afternoon made me pray for you and the releasing of peace and understanding for you! I have missed seeing you here on the Soup! It's nice to see you here today! This poem is such an illustrious piece, Great Work!!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/17/2017 5:01:00 PM
Hi Russell! Thank you for visiting this and leaving such a kind comment. and also thank you for your thoughtful prayers. I have also prayed for your healing from earlier on, hearing about your injury and I hope that you are doing ok. :)
Date: 9/17/2017 12:35:00 PM
So tender, Heidi - a poem that fits different kinds of losses.
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Date: 9/17/2017 12:55:00 PM
Thank you Sunlite. Yes, it can! I appreciate your comment on this :)
Date: 9/17/2017 12:10:00 PM
Such a sad poem, Hiedi :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/17/2017 12:22:00 PM
Hi Tahira. Thank you for your visit. Yes, it is a sad situation.
Date: 9/17/2017 12:00:00 PM
This poem depicts well the need for closure on this unsaid!
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Date: 9/17/2017 12:22:00 PM
Exactly Vijay. Thank you for your comment and insightful feedback :)

Book: Shattered Sighs