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This once majestic creature - its form now a dried hide stretched over mutilated bones. As defenseless in death, as it was in life, its tusks hacked from its noble skull. Its ear rests serenely on its shoulder among dead sticks the carcass testifies to the barbarity of evil men front legs folded back where it heaved in agony- gave its last breath to vile humanity. Who can explain to children, the reality of their storybook elephants or zoo friends? Out in the wild places, even when protected they succumb to greed and avarice. Someday the spaces of Africa will be filled with extinction. 4/7/2016 For Silent Ones Images that make you think - #2 3rd Place

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Date: 4/27/2016 9:37:00 PM
Suz, Congratulations on your " Images that make you think WIN." Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/15/2016 10:05:00 AM
Dear Silent One: thank you for such an honor and also for raising awareness on the desperate issues in the world around us, Ever, Suzanne
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Date: 4/14/2016 10:48:00 PM
Powerful write Susan...Congrats on your win
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/15/2016 10:10:00 AM
Thankyou Joseph: I appreciate your encouraging comment. Best, SuZ
Date: 4/14/2016 9:38:00 PM
Congrats on your win., Suzanne! Very well written:)
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/15/2016 10:12:00 AM
Dear Laura: Thank you for your always gracious comments. SuZ
Date: 4/11/2016 9:48:00 AM
This describes the picture beautifully, Suzanne. What a pity that these animals are slaughtered for personal gain! Only this past week I read of all those elephants killed and left to rot after their tusks had been stolen! ~ Regards // paul
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/11/2016 6:23:00 PM
Hi Paul: So unbelievable that men could create a killing field. I can't describe how helpless I feel when I read about the senseless slaughter of these herds. Thanks for visiting. It means a lot. SuZ
Date: 4/10/2016 7:52:00 PM
G'day Suzanne ... nicely written on a subject that abhors most people. It's the money folk in faraway countries that need to be hunted down and exposed - thank you Suzanne - Lindsay
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/11/2016 6:28:00 PM
That is so true, Laurie: They are supplying a coveted commodity. They could create the same carved horns out of a synthetically molded tusk. It is beyond frustrating to know about it with no power to change it. They are being killed without the chance to pro- create . Thanks for stopping by today. SuZ
Date: 4/9/2016 12:43:00 AM
It's sad what happens out there in the jungle to these unsuspecting creatures ... I think a species of rhino finally became extinct rather recently ... shows the dark truth of your last line becoming fulfilled. "Who can explain to children, the reality of their storybook elephants or zoo friends?" ... I'd rather not be the one to tell them. Tragic poem you wrote here, but with a great note of caution.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/9/2016 2:17:00 AM
Yes this picture is very haunting. How men can be so barbaric on an issue concerning creatures that God entrusted us to protect is beyond me. Sad about the rhinos extinction. Hurts me to the core.
Date: 4/8/2016 2:03:00 AM
Suzanne.. a very relevant and timely poem.. well penned
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/9/2016 1:23:00 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting, Lewis: I can only re-iterate. The love of money is the root of all evil.

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