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Words Stringing Out and About

I Your writing takes me higher, to a brighter day Response: Your words, too, doth reader repay II Sad and poignant, yet depression held at bay In good and bad times, you display a mainstay NOTE: the longer version was lost in space .... Cyberspace. Maybe it is ENOUGH SAID, by the Universe. ThanX for reading PS. Bless u, shalom shalom

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Joe Dimino

Date: 5/12/2022 7:54:00 PM

I think of Christ's loving, comforting words and presence. A little something for everyone...excellent write!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/12/2022 12:34:00 PM

This one makes me think of Leonard Cohen, a most satiating poet for me. Lovely lines dear poet! xomo

Vickey Rhymer

Date: 5/11/2022 1:24:00 PM

Anil,your words speak of the ballast of faith in the day to day beautifully.Had couple of pieces edited electronically as well only to decide I agreed with the edit.Thanks for your uplifting contribution to this day.

Anil Deo
Date: 5/11/2022 10:11:00 PM

O my Dear One, Jesus is, was faithful to God & Jewish tradition & so He is the standard. Yet Jesus is no doormat & while neverharah to sinners Synagogue scoffed at, he took in the RELIGION if the day in Matthew 23 ('whitewashed tombs,' vipers, "hypocrites" & Satans kids)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/11/2022 10:19:00 AM

You are an eloquent disciple of faith for universal believers - you spread faith, love and humanity in huge doses. Hugs and blessings, shalom and Eireene. Jennifer.

Valsa George

Date: 5/11/2022 8:47:00 AM

So beautifully written Anil brother. Poetry of our fellow poets takes each one of us to a brighter day ! That's why we often log onto Poetry Soup

Anil Deo
Date: 5/11/2022 10:17:00 PM

Sis Valsa George, glory to our God and Savior: sometimes they words & "life experiences:" are blessed. We write fir many reasons; thus is one of them thanX for yr encouragement. Shalom shalom

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/11/2022 6:17:00 AM

One of your best my friend. A FAVE from me for the soothing effect of poetry your poem succinctly conveys.

Anil Deo
Date: 5/11/2022 7:07:00 AM

Hallelujah. You are first to this one, a humble but felt experience, & Graced it with Uour usual praise overflowing from thy soul. The universe is syncD more visibly by positive words vs negative