Anil Deo Poet Rhyme

Words Stringing Out and About

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Your writing takes me higher, to a brighter day
Response: Your words, too, doth reader repay
II
Sad and poignant, yet depression held at bay
In good and bad times, you display a mainstay

NOTE: the longer version was lost in space .... Cyberspace. Maybe it is ENOUGH SAID, by the Universe. ThanX for reading PS. Bless u, shalom shalom

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Joseph P. DiMino May 12, 2022 at 7:54 PM I think of Christ's loving, comforting words and presence. A little something for everyone...excellent write!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 12, 2022 at 12:34 PM This one makes me think of Leonard Cohen, a most satiating poet for me. Lovely lines dear poet! xomo

Vickey Rhymer May 11, 2022 at 1:24 PM Anil,your words speak of the ballast of faith in the day to day beautifully.Had couple of pieces edited electronically as well only to decide I agreed with the edit.Thanks for your uplifting contribution to this day. Anil Deo May 11, 2022 at 10:11 PM O my Dear One, Jesus is, was faithful to God & Jewish tradition & so He is the standard. Yet Jesus is no doormat & while neverharah to sinners Synagogue scoffed at, he took in the RELIGION if the day in Matthew 23 ('whitewashed tombs,' vipers, "hypocrites" & Satans kids)

Jennifer Proxenos May 11, 2022 at 10:19 AM You are an eloquent disciple of faith for universal believers - you spread faith, love and humanity in huge doses. Hugs and blessings, shalom and Eireene. Jennifer.

Valsa George May 11, 2022 at 8:47 AM So beautifully written Anil brother. Poetry of our fellow poets takes each one of us to a brighter day ! That's why we often log onto Poetry Soup Anil Deo May 11, 2022 at 10:17 PM Sis Valsa George, glory to our God and Savior: sometimes they words & "life experiences:" are blessed. We write fir many reasons; thus is one of them thanX for yr encouragement. Shalom shalom

Vijay Pandit May 11, 2022 at 6:17 AM One of your best my friend. A FAVE from me for the soothing effect of poetry your poem succinctly conveys. Anil Deo May 11, 2022 at 7:07 AM Hallelujah. You are first to this one, a humble but felt experience, & Graced it with Uour usual praise overflowing from thy soul. The universe is syncD more visibly by positive words vs negative