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This was originally called "Words Can Be," I just had to change the title for the 'Rattling Rhyme' contest - 

Words can be whimsical, a merry-go-round
They run in a circle, they bounce up and down
They play hide-and-seek, until they are found
Look how quickly the little ones grow!

Words can seduce like a scandalous dance
They'll perplex the complex, if given a chance
They're as sincere as England, as sexy as France
As reckless as the caution they throw

Words can get tipsy if taken too much
The pretentious go on-and-on about such-and-such
The brutish ones can bail you out in a clutch
The foolhardy don't know they don't know

Words can be tacky, tongue wagging gabs
Words can be lavish and leave you the tab
Words can covertly steal and grab
Their smile is only for show

Words can impulsively issue a dare
Words can react with extravagant flair
But words must always be handled with care
When timing's too slow, for words on the go

Look how quickly the little ones grow!
As reckless as the caution they throw
The foolhardy don't know they don't know
Their smile is only for show
When timing's too slow 
For words on the go-

8/7/18

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Date: 1/20/2021 4:18:00 PM
What a fun and playful study on words ~ so glad this charming poem was published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~
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Date: 10/20/2020 10:41:00 PM
Coming back to see how well your little ones have grown! This is an excellent choice for the Anthology, as are your other two. Crossing my fingers that you will be well represented in the PS Anthology!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 12/1/2020 7:55:00 PM
I'm glad it will be included, as your wonderful poems also, John :)
Date: 8/1/2020 9:13:00 PM
Michelle, you must know me pretty well to recommend this one... I love wordplay and writings about writing, and rollicking rhythms. I see you won with Nina which must make you feel very accomplished... I really enjoyed how you anthropomorphize words to be different ages and personalities, with varying virtues and vices. Definitely a FAV for me, to be enjoyed multiple times in the future. Love the rhymes and form too, it's similar to a Constanza which I've seen a few of lately. Parfait! ~ John
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/2/2020 4:59:00 PM
I'm so glad you liked it, John - and I never thought about the 'personification' angle of this before, so thank you for the new perspective! As for the form, I had noticed Nina had done a few of her poems in a similar style, so I very shamelessly copied her! It is fun to go back and revisit some of the older writes, isn't it?
Date: 8/31/2018 12:58:00 PM
A brilliant winning entry Michelle. Congratulations! Excellent and a fave for me as well! : )
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/31/2018 3:14:00 PM
So grateful for your visit and kind words, Connie!
Date: 8/30/2018 1:52:00 PM
Really enjoyed this! Congratulations on your win. Well written, rhymes are excellent, and all fell into place. :)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/31/2018 3:14:00 PM
Thank you, again, Susan, your comments always brighten my day!
Date: 8/29/2018 6:43:00 AM
Very clever, Michelle, and how true. Congrats! Viv x
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/31/2018 3:15:00 PM
Thank you, Viv, I enjoyed yours as well!
Date: 8/28/2018 7:15:00 PM
I'm back to say CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! Janice
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/31/2018 3:15:00 PM
Thank you again, Janice, congratulations to you too!
Date: 8/28/2018 5:32:00 PM
If I could make this a 'double-FAV' I would, Michelle. I think it just sums up what any writer, but especially a poet, is all about. Really now, get this published somewhere. You've got my endorsement. (Soupmail)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/28/2018 6:07:00 PM
I was wondering if my work was really ready to submit to a publication, but now I think I may try it!
Date: 8/14/2018 10:09:00 AM
Just read it again, and it's even better the second time around, which is the sign of actual literary value ! by the way. Hold on to the rights for this one, Michelle. Best wishes, gw
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/16/2018 2:29:00 PM
Thanks, I definitely will!
Date: 8/14/2018 9:40:00 AM
Greeeaat poem!! Love the crisp coolness of the rhymes, Michelle. It flows w/such hip-bop truthfulness. So jazzy oxinato shines your pulsar pen. Love and more love always. Romantic Warrior
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/16/2018 2:32:00 PM
Thanks, Freddie - I like 'Waltzing Words' very clever-
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 8/14/2018 9:44:00 AM
Btw ... the original title, "Words Can Be" had me thinking of an alternative name dancing in my head while reading this sublime poem ... "Word Waltzing." Ha, ha ... ha! Love and hugs.
Date: 8/13/2018 7:21:00 AM
Amen and yes, to WORD/S. Look how "from," - in Latin, EX - becomes EXISTENTIALISM. Shalom, and thanks for reading my senryu on skies. Anil Deo
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/13/2018 2:44:00 PM
Thank you for that wise nugget of a word, wishing you all the best!
Date: 8/12/2018 7:12:00 PM
This is proof that a poem can be rollicking AND meaningful, Michelle! Janice
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/13/2018 2:44:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and kind comment, Janice!
Date: 8/9/2018 12:12:00 PM
A winner for sure, Michelle --- at least in my book. Such a delightful romp, so perfectly penned. It's a fave of mine for sure! Best wishes, Gershon
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/11/2018 6:15:00 PM
Always grateful for your encouraging comments, Gershon!
Date: 8/7/2018 3:13:00 PM
Lovely verse Michelle but we'd be speechless without them. Good luck. Tom
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/7/2018 6:14:00 PM
That is literally true, thanks Tom!
Date: 8/7/2018 1:12:00 PM
I do not have much time, but so glad I took the tie to read this poem. This verse is 100 percent adorable: "They'll perplex the complex, if given a chance They're as sincere as England, as sexy as France." I love the sense of fun in this poem, Michelle.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/7/2018 1:22:00 PM
Thanks, Caren - this originally was an older piece (from twenty plus years on) but I actually rewrote and edited it so much it became something completely new!
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