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All is quiet on the hill Where everything is still Waiting for the sun to rise Each day, a new surprise Crisp air clears the mind Of solutions I cannot find I move with how I feel And accept what is real Change arrives in mysterious ways Sometimes it captures the days When less is known From where I have now flown I may not understand Certain places where I land But, I wait for the sun to rise To fly with the words of the wise Heidi Sands 11/5/17

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Date: 11/5/2017 6:40:00 AM
Yes, this is so true, the words of the wise....that wouldn't be me really, but there are many people that could give you wise advice! Just like the sun gives these wise moments of glory! I love the fact that there is a lot of peace on your hill, that is majestic in so many ways, and waiting on the sun to rise is always a beautiful thing! I surely loved reading this delightful poem this morning! What a grandiose piece, Great work!!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/5/2017 6:46:00 AM
Thank you Russell. Yes, it is very peaceful here. I hope you enjoy your day :)
Date: 11/5/2017 5:40:00 AM
A lovely, somewhat philosophical write, Heidi. Thanks for sharing. Regards, John.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/5/2017 5:44:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and comment, John. :)
Date: 11/5/2017 4:53:00 AM
A message of life intertwined with the imagery of pending dawn--a calming poem!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/5/2017 4:54:00 AM
Thank you Vijay. I am happy to hear it is calming.

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