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Words From Rain

surrounded by dark drops of rain dance one by one each forming letters words spelled out in haste as the next covers the last all mean the same thing Skats "Dark Rain" contest...

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/6/2011 4:28:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/4/2011 11:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this fine duo of haiku poems.

Christine A Kysely

Date: 1/29/2011 10:49:00 AM

Wonderful!!! I love it!

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/24/2011 6:08:00 AM

Hi Michael - Congratulations on your WIN in the "Dark Rain" contest. Best wishes, KC

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/20/2011 2:42:00 PM

a mysterious end as mysterious as the rain can be! Congrad's Light & Love HUGS too!

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 1/19/2011 1:28:00 PM

Oh so good haiku Micheal.Congrats on your 5th.place win.~Teresa~

The Situation

Date: 1/18/2011 7:24:00 PM

congradulations on your win. T. H.

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 1/18/2011 1:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2011 7:18:00 PM

Love it, Michael. A very well deserved win and a 7. Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/17/2011 2:17:00 PM

Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Michael

James Fraser

Date: 1/17/2011 12:08:00 PM

Many congratulations Michael on your win in Skat's contest with this fine Haiku....:)

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/17/2011 11:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest, Michael! Always, Annalise

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/17/2011 8:29:00 AM

Oh, I love the unique nature of this clever poem....I picture those raindrops as letters forming words, being erased by new rain...well done!!! (I would have placed this one higher on the winner's list!)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/17/2011 5:44:00 AM

Congrats to my White Knight of P.S. for your stunning success in the Dark Rain contest with this fabulous entry full of vibrant images luv.. enjoy another top tenner for your great poetry and artistic talent.. Jersey Girl so happy Jets won ..tell Roseanna I am rooting for them against arch nemesis Pittsburgh.. but don't let Ron know..he is an avid Steelers fan being from the steel city..haha..luv...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/17/2011 5:35:00 AM

Congratulations for your win in the "Dark Rain" contest Michael, sponsored by S K A T*. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/17/2011 3:44:00 AM

Congratulations Mr. F, hope you had a stunning weekend, love Wilma

Kash Poet

Date: 1/17/2011 2:42:00 AM

Congrats Michael on your big win!!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/16/2011 9:43:00 PM

Very clever Michael. Congratulations. Love, joyce

Skat A

Date: 1/16/2011 9:26:00 PM

Congratulations, Michael !thank you so much for your Haiku. I had fun reading every dark rain entry~luv~SKAT

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/16/2011 7:29:00 AM

Quite a unique write indeed Michael, love it, but you know that hehe, love Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2011 1:36:00 PM

oh, gosh, one more I did not see! This is most intesting AND unique!!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/14/2011 11:31:00 PM

ooh I love how this makes me ponder, Michael-- sure am wondering what words were spelled out-- love your writes on rain-- very well done :) Thank you for dropping by my poems, Michael-- happy to be back here :D -- see you around :) - nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/14/2011 8:21:00 PM

Beautifully written Michael.. good luck in the contest on dark rain... u gave them life luv.. enjoy the weekend with the fair lady and we will be glued to TV sets this weekend of playoffs .... hoping for Jets and Falcons wins... all the way!!! Jersey Girl always with luv..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/14/2011 4:08:00 PM

Hello, again here I find myself trying to go down the list..lol.. but every time I make a comment my phone rings... so here i am stuck on your page for the last 10 minutes... but, thats a good thing.. he he he! now ""i have it all spelled out in a "mind".. hard thoughts.. enjoyed,, the best of luck,,p.d.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/14/2011 3:13:00 PM

Enjoyed the world through your eyes the poet...Sara