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This is who I would have been

I could have been your next of kin

The world we could have painted bright

Had not I been caught and gassed that horrific night

Words For Those With No Voice

Words For Those With No Voice

For every pair of shoes
All the burnt bones and woes
In the millions, in the mud
All died alone

Starving of food and having lost our souls
Our god abandoned us so
Mother father
Sister brother
Fuel for the Reich, we lay slaughtered

Some of us were saved
By those whose honor made them brave
We must salute them all, the bold and the dead
Even if we have only skeletons to mark their stead

Now that time has passed
There will be contests, it will be a blast
Who wins first? Who wins third?
The holocaust deserves no prize
Why must we die twice, this is absurd?

Honor me with a prayer
A poem
A moment of silence
A heart felt thought about humanity
Prose and verse, to remember the atrocities
This is the honor of men of a higher velocity

Never make a circus of the horrific gas chambers
A contest of who makes the horrors more real or titillating
Its not you the writer or the reader that feels
It’s us gassed and burned and buried with our id numbers
Asleep in the fields in slumber

Yellow stars fading away in silence, in tears
No grave markers to shout out of atrocious fears

The subtly of honor is lost on the crass
Maybe it’s them who should be buried under this grass



Notes:
I realize this is a delicate issue, I wrote this poem only because is of my opinion, that having a contest on such issues unless for specific venues, causes, etc. is somewhat tasteless. There is no right or wrong, this is simply by view or take on things and thus have expressed so via this poem. A contest implies a prize or reward even be it praise, and so to profit from so many peoples suffering, well I have explained why. However that being said, any expression or illustration dedicated to honoring and bringing to the light such atrocities, is a different issue. 

That being said good intentions are just that, no matter how misguided they may be. We should be grateful we live where we are free to express our sentiments, feelings and beliefs, without fear of repercussion, and that by its very nature will mean many have diverse opinions and views on any issue.
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Duet Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 3:58 PM
So poignant and true. And, I get it. That is one reason I don't enter many contests. I write whatever is laid upon my heart just to get it out, so to speak...not FOR a contest. Anyway, I love this poem. It should become a "classic".
Murray Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 1:30 PM
Like the mother who miscarries, I cannot imagine her pain. Nor can I have "a take" on something so horrific. Fair dues to you for speaking out while others squirm uncomfortably, not knowing why.
Smith Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 9:13 PM
We are lucky enough to be writing in a place where we can openly express our views. That being said there are ways to write about delicate situation. While a contest might not be the best way to go about it, it is good to discuss such atrocities. Maybe a forum can be held, certain books can be suggested, and ideas can be exchanged.
Onclaud Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 7:50 PM
there is such a thing as Holocaust Remembrance Day so we will not forget this inhuman act, arthur... deep poem which breaks my heart.. never again should this happen.. i hope the seeker blesses each one with a spot...couldn't join this; too sensitive for me.. huggs
Nance Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 5:41 PM
Your write starts so wretching, history is filled with abuses both small and large. I know your stance on contests A couple years ago, I don't remember who had a contest I wrote a poem for about the Genocide in Holodorm if it wasn't for that contest I would have never known, I researched the heck out of it before I wrote, I didn't place in that contest, but I was proud I presented a great poem to the world about the tragedy. I hope contest or not that poets really can feel the power in their pen
Hamilton Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 8:15 AM
Well said Cas, my point exactly!
Vaso Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 8:55 PM
There are many ways to bring issues to light, we must first think not of us the writers, or even the readers, but maybe the victums, for if we wish to honor them lets do so in a way that they themselves find respectable and acceptable. Hugs!
Lindley Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 9:13 AM
Brilliantly written poetry my friend. We must never forget that hate and horror rests comfortably within man's heart. Light, shine light upon that great Evil--for without light shown upon it- such brutal darkness registers not with those walking in educated blindness daily.
Vaso Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 8:52 PM
Thanks Robert, I always appreciate your kind words!
Hamilton Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 8:15 AM
I appreciate your point of view, however, I see all contest as prompts to inspire poems, to inspire thoughts and to express what would perhaps never have entered the mind otherwise. 76 years later who is thinking about it, the new generation doesn't even know about it.
Vaso Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 8:51 PM
Sorry the post to Richard jumped
Vaso Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 8:50 PM
yes you have a valid point, however if ever one wants to honor someone it is also a good idea to maybe seek the opinions of those you wish to honor, after-all, there are many ways to do so, and why not choose one that is fitting. That being said I agree is always good to bring things to light! Its a sensitive issue to many, and I wrote not from my own perspective on this, s the title suggests! :)
Vaso Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 8:45 PM
Hi Richard yes, I understand, bringing things to light is always good, I was speaking for those with no voice, there is no right or wrong, was trying to give a unique perspective! Prizes never have to be material, many a Nazi was rewarded with a pat on the back.
Allison Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 12:10 AM
Bravo Arthur, for very personal reasons it is not a subject I feel comfortable writing about:-( Hugs jan xx
Vaso Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 12:19 AM
Thanks, hope I conveyed the appropriate message and balance!
Roberts Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 11:08 PM
this atrocity will never be forgotten, not even by the non jewish people. Time has passed and now personal homage is all that is needed, we will never forget....well written ....Seren
Vaso Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 12:18 AM
Thank you Seren!
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