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Words Aren'T Enough

You raised your voice, you lifted your hand Because I dared to expect respect You beat me, you tore me, you cut me, you hurt me- And now, while I still wear your wounds, and carry your cruelty You bring me an anemic "I'm sorry," like a wilted bouquet Like now everything's OK And I should just forget all that "stuff" But- You beat me, you tore me, you cut me, you hurt me So, No - Words aren't enough Not even poetry.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/8/2018 7:44:00 PM
Wow, cool poem -JT
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Date: 5/7/2018 11:20:00 AM
It s a really deep and powerful poem, yes you re right, words aren t enough, in fact nothig is enough, if someone has hit you once,he sure will hit you another time,and this concept of hitting and sorry will go on and on, don t let anybody hurt you just because you love that person, good luck
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/7/2018 11:35:00 AM
Thank you, this is actually fictional, but inspired by stories I have heard from other brave women-
Date: 4/19/2018 12:56:00 PM
No ...not even poetry. May every woman who reads this know that a simple "I'm sorry" is not enough. Wonderfully said Michelle!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/20/2018 9:03:00 AM
Thank you, that means a lot-
Date: 4/15/2018 11:25:00 AM
Michelle, Courage is the finest of all human qualities because it guarantees all the others.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/15/2018 11:34:00 AM
Yes, so true - thank you carlos, for your inspiring comment-
Date: 4/15/2018 10:26:00 AM
A dense poem of strength and standing against abuse. Well done, Michelle.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/15/2018 11:01:00 AM
Thank you, so appreciate your encouraging words-

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