Words a Mystic Rose Split-Haiku

Words bewail actions Non-interventional distractions Losing Love in translations

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Rizwana Bhurani

Date: 4/2/2016 11:42:00 AM

Ya true....clever write.....enjoyed.....best wishes

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/2/2016 12:10:00 PM

Thank you Rizwana...Charlie

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/14/2016 8:48:00 AM

I enjoyed your split ku! I'm starting to see a lot of these.

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/14/2016 10:47:00 AM

A new twist on an old form. Thanks stopping by...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/13/2016 8:05:00 PM

oh I see , it's a FORM of Mystic's. (just reading what you had replied to Broken Wings)

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/13/2016 8:08:00 PM

Yes, just thought I would give it a whirl.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/13/2016 8:04:00 PM

Was this written for Mystic or with her? An interesting ku!

Constance La France

Date: 3/13/2016 4:52:00 PM

Charlie, very interesting and am loving this 7 ~

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/13/2016 4:58:00 PM

It's an interesting new form from Mystic Rose. Thanks for post, you're very kind Broken Wings