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Words (Of Advice For Neophyte)

If you are a poet You already know it, To words you forever are bound. Your brain has them in there. You must make them more clear. They are music without any sound. You didn't pick them, You cannot evict them. They just keep rolling around. They'll stay in your head. You can't put them to bed Until you have written them down. Not all unforgettable Nor even regrettable. Some are merely small puffs of steam To relieve the pressure In minuscule measure, Subtracting the milk from the cream. With checks of your spelling And on good grammar dwelling, Your talent will carry you through. Don't throw it away On the fads of the day. Old is sometimes better than new. Shortcuts used in texting Are in poetry vexing. It shows disrespect for the art. Big words aren't always better In your poem or letter. Familiar is best at the start. Someday you'll collect them And learn to connect them Into poetry making you proud. Poems don't come without working Nor with diligence shirking. You'll know when you read them aloud. written for Linda Marie's "Poem Panorama" contest tied for no. 3

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Date: 12/10/2010 9:27:00 AM
special CHEERS on your win, joyce!
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Date: 12/9/2010 3:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 12/3/2010 7:45:00 PM
Really enjoyed reading your poem this evening.
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Date: 11/23/2010 9:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Joyce in the "Poetry Panorama" contest hosted by Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/22/2010 8:02:00 PM
Joyce, I love how you mention the honing of the craft, and saying that it takes work. I really wish everyone would put more thought and diligence in their writing to produce poetry such as yours. Luv and Congratulations!
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Date: 11/20/2010 9:19:00 AM
An inculcating diatribe on the art of poetry writing. Your old fashioned advice is potent. Trite, shallow writing is not poetry. It is hack writing meant to imitate real poetry. Keep preaching to the choir! A well-deserved ribbon for a well, thought-out poem.
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Date: 11/17/2010 9:38:00 PM
Joyce...many congrats on big win in the contest... Luv/Best wishes.... hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/16/2010 7:51:00 PM
You have so beautifully described a poet and his poetry. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 11/16/2010 4:33:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Joyce
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Date: 11/16/2010 3:46:00 AM
Joyce congratulations on your win in Linda's contest with this gem that had me smiling from beginning to end.. Enjoy your day further, love Wilma
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Date: 11/16/2010 12:24:00 AM
appluase on your win,joyce.. this piece isa hotshot! thaks for your greeting regarding mine.. warmest, nette
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Date: 11/15/2010 11:41:00 PM
Well pictured of poetry panorama, congratulations on your 3rd place win to Linda-Marie's contest. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 11/15/2010 6:08:00 PM
You are definitely a poet.....and we all know it, dear Joyce!!!! :) Congratulations!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 11/15/2010 4:07:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your success in my Poetry Panorama contest with this exceptional write and entry .. a grand piece .. thankxx for your constant support of my contests ..luv..
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Date: 11/13/2010 11:49:00 AM
wonderful, Joyce, I can see you put a lot of thought into these words. Good luck in the contest. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/12/2010 10:43:00 AM
Very good thoughts on words, they can be so powerful.
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Date: 11/12/2010 10:34:00 AM
Very wonderful entry and nice write on the Words, Joyce
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