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Wordplay Extravaganza Sponsor: John Hamilton Bugs bunny was the silliest hare with such a bright future ahead, he wanted to give Lola something special, but he gave her a carrot instead. He pondered on a different surprise, and wrote Lola a sweet love letter, asking her to marry him, because of her his life was much better. He proof read his proposal and realized he forgot one very special phrase, so he clicked the caret button to insert a few sentiments then pressed save. All he had hoped for was that he expressed his love with his honest words, for he wanted to fill this day with rainbows with sweet songs from Tweety bird. The day flew by and night time arrived, that silly wabbit was nervous, he smelled her scent and watched her approach him, boy was he wordless! “My Lola, from Pensacola, I give you this twenty four karat gold ring, a three carat princess diamond placed gently above the gold and in between. Marry me, my sweet, I'll sweep you off your feet, I'd love to play with your hair...." She said yes, of course...and a few months later there was a family of baby hares.
Homophones used: 1. carrot-A vegetable 2. karat-weight of gold 3. carat-size of diamonds 4. caret-a symbol used to indicate the place in writing material which something is to be inserted. 1. Hare- a rabbit 2. Hair- a growth of filaments forming a coat over the scalp of a humans head ~Date Written: March 18, 2016~

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Date: 3/29/2016 3:18:00 AM
Brilliant take Laura loo .. enjoyed much.. congrats on big win!
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Date: 3/28/2016 3:20:00 PM
Laura, great write! Congratulations on your win in the Wordplay Extravaganza contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/28/2016 2:09:00 PM
so beautifully crafted luLoo - sure made me smile:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/18/2016 7:54:00 PM
Nicely done. Appreciate the source material too!
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/18/2016 8:05:00 PM
Thank you Tom :)-luloo
Date: 3/18/2016 11:28:00 AM
Very nice use of the homophones Luloo...I loved that silly wabbit growing up...poor Elmer never had a chance
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Date: 3/18/2016 12:06:00 PM
lol Nope Elmer did not have a chance! haha-Thanks Tim -luloo
Date: 3/18/2016 11:17:00 AM
Ah...A harelarious tale of love. Well done! : ) J.
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Date: 3/18/2016 12:05:00 PM
J, I apologize about this previous comment! I bade a boo-boo lol , thank you for your silly reply, it made me chuckle! -luloo
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/18/2016 11:17:00 AM
aww many thanks Billy for all your kind feedback! :)-luloo