Michael Jordan Poet Free verse

Word Morph - Dope To Lost

Once while I was high on DOPE
I truly lost sight of the DOVE
Which cost me my LOVE
Such a terrible thing to LOSE
My God I felt so LOST


Inspired by Christie & Nigel's 
New Contest- Word Morph
Hopefully I did it right

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Raul Moreno January 25, 2009 at 3:24 PM Nice job on your morph Michael and congrats on your HM. The message behind your morph is nice and sincere...Raul

Brian Strand January 24, 2009 at 12:47 AM Congrats on your success in Nigel & Christie's contest Michael.Rgds Brian

Constance La France January 23, 2009 at 5:34 PM I think it should have won a higher rating .... so gripping.. congrats on your win.. Constance

Robin L. Gass January 23, 2009 at 4:25 PM Congratulations on your win, Micheal! This really is a wonderfull poem. Love, Robin

Maryam Jameela Haniff January 23, 2009 at 4:19 PM wow this is great!....Congrats on your win!...awesome job!...thanx for the congrats...love Maryam

Carrie Richards January 23, 2009 at 1:31 PM Well done, Michael, on this emotional poem! Congratulations, Nor Cal friend! ~ Carrie

Sharon Winter January 23, 2009 at 12:39 PM Congrats Michael on your win in Nigel's contest. An awesome write. Love, Shar

Michael Degenhardt January 21, 2009 at 10:37 AM Right or wrong, this is good in the style and truly offers the reader a real sense, a true message. Very well written. Michael

Constance La France January 20, 2009 at 10:10 AM Ihad a difficult time writing mine also.. not easy to do.. this word morph thingy..good luck in the contest... and thank you so much for your comments on my poem Dads Workshed, I was very surprised to have it as one of the featured poems.. constance

Christopher Higgins January 18, 2009 at 8:27 AM Running from the POPO..lol..that had me cracking up..haven't heard that in a minute....by the way translation for those who may not know..POPO are the police..lol..love it Michael.

Brian Strand January 18, 2009 at 12:59 AM Best wishes with this one Michael.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Sharon Winter January 17, 2009 at 12:31 PM Check your soup mail when you get a chance. xoxo

Vince Suzadail Jr. January 15, 2009 at 1:16 PM Very creative, Michael. God Bless. Vince

James Foulk January 14, 2009 at 3:17 PM Michael this was another great piece you wrote as only you can do. thank you for reading my poetry and for your kind comments. I have not been on the internet this year until today, sorry it took me so long to read some of your poems and to thank you.

Elaine George January 14, 2009 at 12:11 AM Again! Michael you amaze me with the depths of your insight, wisdom, and deep compasion. A winner for sure! In answer to your question - I am working on my second book and well let you know when it is ready. Much love to you and your family. Lainie

Derrick Burton January 7, 2009 at 5:42 PM real poetry and it really comes across clear as the speaker has placed it. enjoyed readding it. YOU GOT MAIL.

Heidie Buys January 7, 2009 at 2:04 PM Interesting and very well written. Love the message. Well done. Love Heidie

Tyesha Ehigiator January 6, 2009 at 5:59 PM Michael, this is very deep but well written and courageously expressed, Keep up the Great work and thank you so much for all the wonderful comments, I'm glad you are still posting and hope you will continue, God Bless You and Thanks again.....Tyesha

Mary Duhart January 6, 2009 at 7:05 AM Nicely done. Continue to share.

Mc Mc January 6, 2009 at 6:20 AM INTERESTING-STUNNING MORPH! GOOD IDEA TOO CHRISTIE AND NIGEL! THANK FOR YOUR COMMENTS TOO, MICAHEL!ALL THE BEST!

Chelsea Mcginnis January 6, 2009 at 5:41 AM Very true. I love the subject matter. You touch on a touchy subject with simplicity. Good job. (I would like you to read "Is there life after meth?" It's a poem I wrote that may interest you. I'd like to hear your feedback."

Donna Golden January 5, 2009 at 10:06 PM Looks great to me! Nice work, Michael, and yes...great message! Maybe I'll give it a shot! Donna G.

Daver Austin January 5, 2009 at 7:53 AM You did it right, Mike! There's a definite message here. Love, daver

Brian Strand January 5, 2009 at 12:30 AM Best wishes with this one Michael.Rgds Brian.Will mail you when it arrives.(Can take upto 10 days and last week included a holiday on the 1st).Thanks for your welcome comments on my postings

Cayetano Young January 4, 2009 at 10:23 PM thanks for the welcome comment. happy new year Sir, much respect and adoration, Gino

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