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Word Jazz

WORD JAZZ first the theme make it cool like “smoke be getting in your eyes” this smoke thing needs developing like some shapely hips should hip-smoke swing perfume the air improvise allow cool words go everywhere fingers talk in line-dot-space syncopated meter cool cat verbs each in place go black lines inside your mind that swingin place be mighty fine hip hop feet begin to swing word jazz gone so deep you be stoned, in some cool with-it sleep Dave Austin

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Date: 6/17/2016 7:49:00 PM
Entertaining and a bit different daver. Thoroughly enjoyed this! ; )
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Date: 6/15/2016 7:31:00 PM
Jazzy write, Daver.:) It has its own way of slipping into people's homes. This "Cool Cat" meter makes my friend's dog howl. He must be a poodle wearing a French barrette. Clever piece! Best to you Monsieur Daver! Love, Mikki
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Date: 6/15/2016 3:44:00 PM
nice to see you put this newest jazzy one up over AT Soup. I love when you show us new poems!
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Date: 6/15/2016 3:40:00 PM
You got the jazzy feel, well done Dave..
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