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Word Grace

All day ceremonies of dark's brilliance Led in by outstretched curtains welcoming, An appearance for my time's bleary dusk. The firmament from the red gloom nearing, Of sun's affection for the moon; wrestling. My limbs tumbling down from frosted heights, The sky is closest when I shut my eyes. ------ Where the dying shadows will frame or fade, Comes night; chimes bristle; cicadas like fire. As the breaking noon mists are stayed away— The dreams of leaves in sleep growing louder Whisper low in the black glossy hours— Frosted limbs tumbling from a new height; I still succumb to her prayers in the night.

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Date: 5/28/2024 9:50:00 AM
Really quite stunning, Paige with original, intriguing images that underscore the drama of your poem - "black glossy hours," "cicadas like fire, "chimes bristle." Such wonderful opposition in your images. Blessings to you!
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Date: 5/27/2024 8:18:00 PM
Dear Paige, your use of rich dramatic imagery and intriguing phrases (chimes bristle, frosted limbs), blend to create dynamic poetry. A mesmerizing piece and one to linger over. Absolutely stunning, my inspiring poetry friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/27/2024 7:03:00 PM
The firmament from the red gloom nearing… The sky is closest when I shut my eyes… Where the dying shadows will frame or fade, Comes night; chimes bristle; cicadas like fire…frosted limbs…black glossy hours… Enjoyed, Paige!
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Date: 5/24/2024 7:02:00 PM
Spiritual, prayerful, and wondrous, your poem, Word Grace, has a timeless message. The imagery is beautiful.
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Date: 5/22/2024 3:59:00 PM
What an interesting rhyme royal. I probably did a few in the past but would not recognize one unless told what it was. Beautiful images. Paige.
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Date: 5/22/2024 2:05:00 PM
love this, especially phrases such as "cicada choirs"; this seems quite a challenging form but you write it very well, your versatility as a poet is something to behold...thanks for commenting on my work today
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Date: 5/22/2024 10:03:00 AM
what a beauty this one is - the phrasings, the timing, rhythm/tempo - great work
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Date: 5/22/2024 5:56:00 AM
I have never read any of your works, more's the pity. I live alone and time is a luxury. However I have it in mind to change some of my fav poets as they don't respond. Who knows what is in store for us? Smooth and great poem, probably beyond me as I detect iambic verses. Not being English, such royal verses are beyond me.
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Date: 5/22/2024 12:13:00 AM
“ The sky is closest when I shut my eyes.” What a line dear paige! Your words here really is well woven and so soulful i can tell this one comes from a deep place especially the ending is beautiful . I love the dark shades of your imagery. Pleasure reading this. Sending you light always
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Date: 5/21/2024 10:54:00 PM
This is deep and dark..I really liked your choice of vocabulary for this one..
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