Woopa Bank

I can tell by your face
the clouds intimidate, when weeping,
one look into your soul
tells one how you are keeping.
Oppressive droops the raindrops
wrenched from the saddest sky,
tormented the grey mist swirls
yet my affection, oh so slow to die!
I still see the summer breeze dance
within your tolerant chaste,
till autumn’s manipulation long past,
and quaking trees stand bare.
Throughout my life I recall
blue skies, sunrise ablaze,
one day to recollect again
in this place, where we both were raised!

© Harry J Horsman 2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Loving Iii Avatar
June 24, 2023 at 2:35 PM
The stuff poetry is made of. Thanks for the good stuff the stuff I measure my work by. And compare to great artest of the pen.
Kiser Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 1:11 PM
Lovely sentiments for this individual. Well-penned.
Delaney Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 4:34 PM
hello Harry:Stopping by to send good wishes and to let you know you are in my thoughts. Hope you have a nice window to look out on. Smiles, SuZ
Darnell Sr Avatar
April 21, 2023 at 1:23 PM
Nice penning, Harry! The imagery here drew me right in and it was wonderful imagery to say the least. I hope you are becoming strong enough to rejoin us back here at Soup station, where everyone is concerned for you and your health. You and your family are in my thought's, and prayers. Take care and get well, my friend! Best Wishes, William
Proxenos Avatar
April 18, 2023 at 12:07 PM
Hi Harry have returned to this poem to ask if you are well and over any health problem that concerned the whole of Poetry Soup, including me. I look forward to your next wonderful write which knows no limits, for the wonder and eloquence you bring to them . Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Cornwall Avatar
April 2, 2023 at 9:55 PM
Lovely Horseman and reminds me of my love of Poetry and why it takes brilliance to such heights by and by. Harry all I can say is from The Sun Also Rises,”Rather!” When Brett was asked if she wanted a martini. That’s what I’d say about this writing of yours. “ Rather”
Proxenos Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 9:50 AM
You are an absolute magic poet whose intense reminiscing creates heartfelt emotions with the one you love and always did love and who will always remain very dear to you - your memories locked into chambers of your mind never to be lost. Hugs and blessings - Jennifer.
Wolf Avatar
March 22, 2023 at 6:29 PM
Stirring recollection of tender moments of the past, as life comes full circle. Stunning write, Harry! Light and Illumination, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 12:08 PM
yet my affection, oh so slow to die! We go through so much…look forward to days of love which pass all too fast, then look into the past…still those memories keep the vision alive. God bless you, Harry!
Peck Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 9:56 AM
Oh, Harry--So very sweet and sad. It's lovely.
Deo Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 4:10 AM
Tolerant chaste, chastity, wow! It will save religion and preachers. Thanx for this masterful poetic offering. Shalom shalom
Deo Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 11:11 PM
Solid. Beautiful. Thanks for being here. Shalom shalom Sir Harry (I struggled to add my comment from electricity - corrupted south Africa).
Maverick Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 1:04 PM
Congratulations on the win Harry.' Evocative rendering and smooth Style to add.'
Ricci Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 3:51 AM
Good Morning hh. Yes, this is poetry and poetic. Yes, all elements are attached. It was an honor turning to this entry. Truly. Have a wonderful morning and weekend. May today be all that it can be. Blessings now and always. (smile)
Poet Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 5:50 AM
Harry, your writing is exquisite, and it evokes a lot of feelings. You conjured up vivid mental pictures of the site.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 9:23 AM
A fab recollection and poetic recalling wow! Imagery and muse combined superbly! Kudos!! <<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>*>>>>>>>>>>*********** Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
Kendrick Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 7:41 AM
Way to go Harry with this very creative work. I am wondering if you are talking to a brother or sister. Thanks for sharing. Sara
Pandit Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 7:03 AM
Highly emotive write, Harry. You brought forth the images of the place.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 6:32 AM
Beautiful wording! the clouds intimidate, when weeping, one look into your soul tells one how you are keeping. Oppressive droops the raindrops wrenched from the saddest sky
Turner Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 5:43 AM
Smooth penning Harry. I wish my memories were like this:)
Lawrence Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 4:50 AM
So pure and lovely and sad and beautiful woven together with your magic. A fav for me Harry ! Big hugs to you , Susan :)
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March 7, 2023 at 4:05 AM
wow xx
Andresen Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 1:48 AM
- Heart has set its roots here and you will always remember, Harry - A lovely poem :) - hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 12:50 AM
Wow. Great poem.
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March 7, 2023 at 12:18 AM
Absolutely beautiful and heart touching Harry! Debx
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