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Woodland of My Youth

Along the edge of a forgotten woodland                     
There slithers a wave of  auroral tint,
As daybreak burnishes  its crimson strand 
Glistening a pool of  lilies  an imprint:

Fertile the clay where shore rises  gently--
That I reflect on youth’s laughter, aglow 
The silver-blue waters ebb contently ;
While fields of thistle in new harvest blow.

Despite June’s tempest, I relish  life’s grace
My eyes marking the stencil of ripped trees
A yesterday which draws me to embrace ;
The comfort of kin amidst storm’s reprise.

And rambling up the  woodpath I still love
The misty  tides speak of childhood tunes--
Like  hums dulcet from a skyscape above
Inviting me home,  night sparkling old moons. 


Resubmitted  4/30/2018
Contest of Laura Loo: Any Rhyming Poem In April
Form: Quatrain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/24/2018 7:23:00 AM
Exquisite, nette, lovely. Congrats! Viv x
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Date: 4/24/2018 1:10:00 AM
Congratulations, Nette on your win. A beautiful poem.
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Date: 4/23/2018 10:58:00 PM
What a lovely and serene poem! Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 4/23/2018 5:53:00 PM
Hi Nette, Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/23/2018 2:14:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Nette !!!
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Date: 4/23/2018 1:36:00 PM
Beautiful write Nette...Congrats on your win
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Date: 4/16/2018 8:26:00 PM
What a breath of fresh air! This is so warm and pure! I love your word choices!
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Date: 4/13/2018 8:34:00 AM
I want to go there. Beautiful Nette!
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Date: 4/13/2018 4:56:00 AM
Well, I'm only going to get an honorable mention now lol...beautifully sweet nette...best of luck and stay in the light...^WW^
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Date: 4/12/2018 10:02:00 PM
Wow! You must have been born in the 80's. My childhood memories are nothing like yours and that's good for you:) lol Always the poet, nette:) Good luck .
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Date: 4/12/2018 6:21:00 PM
serenity is felt when reading this poem, thank you for that...such a peaceful write...good luck
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Date: 4/12/2018 4:54:00 PM
Your poem paints a lovely picture, Nette. There is something very special about childhood landscapes. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/12/2018 4:52:00 PM
We somehow go back to youthful reminisces as these are prints of who we are today. Brilliant poetry, warm homecoming!
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Date: 4/12/2018 4:13:00 PM
Beautiful, nette. superbly done.
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Date: 4/12/2018 3:26:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery, seamlessly blending the words! Adorned with your rhythmic style!! Best for a win, nette.
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