Woodland of My Youth

Along the edge of a forgotten woodland                     
There slithers a wave of  auroral tint,
As daybreak burnishes  its crimson strand 
Glistening a pool of  lilies  an imprint:

Fertile the clay where shore rises  gently--
That I reflect on youth’s laughter, aglow 
The silver-blue waters ebb contently ;
While fields of thistle in new harvest blow.

Despite June’s tempest, I relish  life’s grace
My eyes marking the stencil of ripped trees
A yesterday which draws me to embrace ;
The comfort of kin amidst storm’s reprise.

And rambling up the  woodpath I still love
The misty  tides speak of childhood tunes--
Like  hums dulcet from a skyscape above
Inviting me home,  night sparkling old moons. 


Resubmitted  4/30/2018
Contest of Laura Loo: Any Rhyming Poem In April
Form: Quatrain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Wigley Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 7:23 AM
Exquisite, nette, lovely. Congrats! Viv x
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 1:10 AM
Congratulations, Nette on your win. A beautiful poem.
Gentry Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 10:58 PM
What a lovely and serene poem! Congratulations on your win.
Y. Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 5:53 PM
Hi Nette, Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
Gentile Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 2:14 PM
Congrats on your win, Nette !!!
May Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 1:36 PM
Beautiful write Nette...Congrats on your win
Ligon Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 8:26 PM
What a breath of fresh air! This is so warm and pure! I love your word choices!
Lamoureux Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 8:34 AM
I want to go there. Beautiful Nette!
Warrior Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 4:56 AM
Well, I'm only going to get an honorable mention now lol...beautifully sweet nette...best of luck and stay in the light...^WW^
Turner Avatar
April 12, 2018 at 10:02 PM
Wow! You must have been born in the 80's. My childhood memories are nothing like yours and that's good for you:) lol Always the poet, nette:) Good luck .
Parker Avatar
April 12, 2018 at 6:21 PM
serenity is felt when reading this poem, thank you for that...such a peaceful write...good luck
Krampe Avatar
April 12, 2018 at 4:54 PM
Your poem paints a lovely picture, Nette. There is something very special about childhood landscapes. Good luck in the contest.
Gauthier Avatar
April 12, 2018 at 4:13 PM
Beautiful, nette. superbly done.
Pandit Avatar
April 12, 2018 at 3:26 PM
Such beautiful imagery, seamlessly blending the words! Adorned with your rhythmic style!! Best for a win, nette.
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