Emile Pinet Poet Rhyme

Woodland Magic

Tragic tale of woodland magic;
magic expounds on what's tragic.
Dying unicorns start crying,
crying unicorns are dying.
Hosts of fairies attend their ghosts;
ghosts accompany grieving hosts.

Clear streams fouled by a pixy's tear;
tear-tainted streams that once ran clear.
Stars bleed their sadness onto Mars;
Mars flushes with the blood of stars.
Night flickers with candles of light;
light vigils, confetti the night.

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Skat A June 11, 2015 at 4:01 PM this is amazing Emile Pinet June 11, 2015 at 5:01 PM SKAT, you are amazing, thank you so much. Emile.

Sandra Haight June 10, 2015 at 11:45 AM Very clever, Emile! I like the way you addressed the theme. Congratulations on your nice win! Sandra Emile Pinet June 10, 2015 at 7:03 PM Thanks as always Sandra, your support is much appreciated. Emile.

Paul Callus June 10, 2015 at 8:59 AM I am pleased to be back with congratulations, Emile! Well done! // paul Emile Pinet June 10, 2015 at 9:19 AM Thanks Paul, I appreciate your visit. Emile.

Jan Allison June 10, 2015 at 8:06 AM I love the way you have created this Emile - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx Emile Pinet June 10, 2015 at 9:19 AM Thanks Jan, I appreciate your visit. Emile.

Diane Lefebvre May 19, 2015 at 7:49 PM So clever, Emile. I am not sure I could create something like this. A very nice and enjoyable read and an added bonus that the theme involves nature. Best regards, Diane L. Emile Pinet May 20, 2015 at 8:42 AM Thanks Diane, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Paul Callus May 18, 2015 at 4:36 PM This is a fascinating form, Emile. Now you tempt me to have a go at it! I'm admiring your rhyming scheme, and the content is delightful. #7 // paul Emile Pinet May 18, 2015 at 8:53 PM Thanks Paul, what a nice thing to say, I appreciate it. Emile.

Constance La France May 18, 2015 at 11:34 AM Emile, your interpretation of this beautiful art by Lexi is just wonderful, impressive 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, the storm Emile Pinet May 18, 2015 at 1:34 PM Thanks Broken Wings, I appreciate your friendly words of encouragement. Emile.

Anna Hopper May 18, 2015 at 11:17 AM Your words fascinate me. I am always eager to read your poetry! Thank you for sharing such a magical rhyme! Emile Pinet May 18, 2015 at 1:35 PM Thanks Anna, I appreciate your visit. Emile.

Jaycee Cervenka May 18, 2015 at 10:39 AM Lovely response to the picture in a fascinating form Emile. Hopefully this summer I will have time to sit and play with such as this, but for now, I sit back and admire yours! ~Jan Emile Pinet May 18, 2015 at 1:36 PM Ah, what a nice thing to say, thank you Jan. Emile.

Richard Lamoureux May 18, 2015 at 9:37 AM I noticed your third and forth line have ten sylables, is this a break from the form? Either way I love the effect of the poem as a whole! Very creative piece. Emile Pinet May 18, 2015 at 10:14 AM Thanks for catching that Paul, I corrected it. Emile.

Nandita Das May 18, 2015 at 9:13 AM You create such magic with all forms. A beautiful poem. A#7 Emile Pinet May 18, 2015 at 9:22 AM Thanks Nandita, I appreciate your support. Emile.