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Woodland Magic

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Tragic tale of woodland magic; magic expounds on what's tragic. Dying unicorns start crying; crying unicorns are dying. Hosts of fairies attend their ghosts; ghosts can't console those grieving hosts. Clear streams fouled by a pixy's tear; tear-tainted streams that once ran clear. Stars bleed their sadness onto Mars; Mars flushes with the blood of stars. Night flickers with candles of light; light vigils, confetti the night.

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Skat A

Date: 6/11/2015 4:01:00 PM

this is amazing

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/11/2015 5:01:00 PM

SKAT, you are amazing, thank you so much. Emile.

Sandra Haight

Date: 6/10/2015 11:45:00 AM

Very clever, Emile! I like the way you addressed the theme. Congratulations on your nice win! Sandra

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/10/2015 7:03:00 PM

Thanks as always Sandra, your support is much appreciated. Emile.

Paul Callus

Date: 6/10/2015 8:59:00 AM

I am pleased to be back with congratulations, Emile! Well done! // paul

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/10/2015 9:19:00 AM

Thanks Paul, I appreciate your visit. Emile.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/10/2015 8:06:00 AM

I love the way you have created this Emile - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/10/2015 9:19:00 AM

Thanks Jan, I appreciate your visit. Emile.

Diane Lefebvre

Date: 5/19/2015 7:49:00 PM

So clever, Emile. I am not sure I could create something like this. A very nice and enjoyable read and an added bonus that the theme involves nature. Best regards, Diane L.

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/20/2015 8:42:00 AM

Thanks Diane, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/18/2015 4:36:00 PM

This is a fascinating form, Emile. Now you tempt me to have a go at it! I'm admiring your rhyming scheme, and the content is delightful. #7 // paul

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/18/2015 8:53:00 PM

Thanks Paul, what a nice thing to say, I appreciate it. Emile.

Constance La France

Date: 5/18/2015 11:34:00 AM

Emile, your interpretation of this beautiful art by Lexi is just wonderful, impressive 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, the storm

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/18/2015 1:34:00 PM

Thanks Broken Wings, I appreciate your friendly words of encouragement. Emile.

Anna Hopper

Date: 5/18/2015 11:17:00 AM

Your words fascinate me. I am always eager to read your poetry! Thank you for sharing such a magical rhyme!

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/18/2015 1:35:00 PM

Thanks Anna, I appreciate your visit. Emile.

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 5/18/2015 10:39:00 AM

Lovely response to the picture in a fascinating form Emile. Hopefully this summer I will have time to sit and play with such as this, but for now, I sit back and admire yours! ~Jan

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/18/2015 1:36:00 PM

Ah, what a nice thing to say, thank you Jan. Emile.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/18/2015 9:37:00 AM

I noticed your third and forth line have ten sylables, is this a break from the form? Either way I love the effect of the poem as a whole! Very creative piece.

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/18/2015 10:14:00 AM

Thanks for catching that Paul, I corrected it. Emile.

Nandita Das

Date: 5/18/2015 9:13:00 AM

You create such magic with all forms. A beautiful poem. A#7

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/18/2015 9:22:00 AM

Thanks Nandita, I appreciate your support. Emile.