Wooden People

The branching trees stand proud in the evergreen forest
On the canopy clouds torn from the sky come and rest.

Moist leaves get luster from the morning sunrays soon
After the dust is washed by the night rains of monsoon.

Humankind expanded like forest in clustered population
Vibrantly nurturing the tenets of its diverse civilization.

People prospered sharing the earth’s common resources 
Developed kinship and trust as parts of survival process.

If the rains don’t come for some years as they should
The forest soil dries and the trees soon become wood.

Hit so hard by the current trying times people are busy
To find ways to merely survive for life is no longer easy.

Soil of humane feeling called kindness is drying up fast
The touch of empathy in desiccated hearts doesn’t last.

Life has turned into stagnant river, it doesn’t flow free
In ravaged forest people are soulless defoliated trees.

In vortex of turbulent time emotions sink, don’t ripple
The humanity is making a museum of wooden people.

December 4, 2017.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Pandit Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 5:43 AM
Congrats on your well earned win, Subimal.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 2:30 AM
Thank you, Vijay.
Roper Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 8:00 PM
Great imagery , Subimal, congratulations on your win :) Hugs
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 11:51 PM
Thank you, Eve.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 6:50 PM
Thanks for entering my contest, congrats on your 4th place finish.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 11:51 PM
Thank you, Richard for placement. The theme was interesting with many possibilities. The loss of sensibility, I thought, is the bane of present day world.
Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 3:24 PM
wow, I love all your metaphors tied so thoughtfully together, subimal. very nice!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 10:06 PM
Thank you, Andrea for your encouragement.
Sands Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 3:04 PM
Interesting expression in the poem Subimal. Well done :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 10:06 PM
Thank you, Heidi.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 10:19 AM
Excellent :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 10:05 PM
Thank you, Maureen.
Pandit Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 10:12 AM
Lovely!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 10:17 AM
Thank you, Vijay for your prompt comment. I would hope you would agree people (at least some) are fast becoming wood.
Onclaud Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 10:05 AM
a beautiful reminder of man's basic value--- kindness.. may we always remember this.. superb work, subimal.. huggs
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 10:15 AM
Thank you, Nette for commenting on the poem. I don't know if you would agree, losing all values of life fast we are turning into defoliated dry trunk, the wood.
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