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Wooden People

The branching trees stand proud in the evergreen forest On the canopy clouds torn from the sky come and rest. Moist leaves get luster from the morning sunrays soon After the dust is washed by the night rains of monsoon. Humankind expanded like forest in clustered population Vibrantly nurturing the tenets of its diverse civilization. People prospered sharing the earth’s common resources Developed kinship and trust as parts of survival process. If the rains don’t come for some years as they should The forest soil dries and the trees soon become wood. Hit so hard by the current trying times people are busy To find ways to merely survive for life is no longer easy. Soil of humane feeling called kindness is drying up fast The touch of empathy in desiccated hearts doesn’t last. Life has turned into stagnant river, it doesn’t flow free In ravaged forest people are soulless defoliated trees. In vortex of turbulent time emotions sink, don’t ripple The humanity is making a museum of wooden people. December 4, 2017.

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Date: 12/12/2017 5:43:00 AM
Congrats on your well earned win, Subimal.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/13/2017 2:30:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay.
Date: 12/11/2017 8:00:00 PM
Great imagery , Subimal, congratulations on your win :) Hugs
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/11/2017 11:51:00 PM
Thank you, Eve.
Date: 12/11/2017 6:50:00 PM
Thanks for entering my contest, congrats on your 4th place finish.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/11/2017 11:51:00 PM
Thank you, Richard for placement. The theme was interesting with many possibilities. The loss of sensibility, I thought, is the bane of present day world.
Date: 12/4/2017 3:04:00 PM
Interesting expression in the poem Subimal. Well done :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/4/2017 10:06:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi.
Date: 12/4/2017 10:19:00 AM
Excellent :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/4/2017 10:05:00 PM
Thank you, Maureen.
Date: 12/4/2017 10:12:00 AM
Lovely!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/4/2017 10:17:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay for your prompt comment. I would hope you would agree people (at least some) are fast becoming wood.
Date: 12/4/2017 10:05:00 AM
a beautiful reminder of man's basic value--- kindness.. may we always remember this.. superb work, subimal.. huggs
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/4/2017 10:15:00 AM
Thank you, Nette for commenting on the poem. I don't know if you would agree, losing all values of life fast we are turning into defoliated dry trunk, the wood.

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