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Wooden Soul

I make this detection upon introspection of the woodblock inside me named soul I'm sightless to beauty on par with a cootie or, moreover, an underground mole I distinguish not burdock from daisy nor hollyhock a flower is a flower; just that in all shades and shapes their splendor escapes their fragrance akin to rat For music I've no ear from hip-hop to austere discordant cacophonies at best hush is harmonic; uncluttered by sonic my woodblock is calm and at rest Plaintive prose gets right up my nose and further if wordily verbose; I don't mean to knock but it's all poppycock and frankly it's inclined to perturb us. I have more to relate let me share my pet hate 'tis birdsong, a misnomer of speech birds scream and shriek they squeal and they squeak a maddening medley of screech

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/5/2013 3:54:00 PM
Any more pet hates, I bet the list is longer than this lol. Take care, Richard
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Date: 7/18/2013 2:32:00 PM
I'm only commenting on this one again to get your smiling face back in the pic parade haha. Take care Richard
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Date: 6/20/2013 4:56:00 PM
I really love the a flower is just a flower! Great poem and congratulations
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Date: 6/19/2013 9:17:00 PM
Well done Delysia ....Seren
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Date: 6/19/2013 6:57:00 PM
This is so clever and whimsical....love it........the twist of each stanza rolls on my tongue!! It is funny, cute.....and far from annoying to my ear......congratulations, Delysia!!
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Date: 6/10/2013 9:34:00 AM
Delysia, Congratulations with your nice winning poem ... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 6/7/2013 10:56:00 AM
thank you for choosing my contest. Congrats! ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/26/2013 5:39:00 PM
I look at your poems at intervals, just sipping one at a time to get the max enjoyment as long as i can, (coz u dont list many) lol, I love the jibe in this. You are an ace writer and I don't believe for a minute there's a wooden soul at work here. Take care, Richard
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Date: 9/3/2012 10:10:00 AM
Please put some new poems, sweetie. I can't find any of your poems that I have not already seen, and you are so GOOD with words. I'm still waiting!!
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Date: 6/12/2011 1:58:00 PM
An inventive and amusing poem. I hope you are only joking?! I'm sure you have a soul of pure gold! Best wishes, Robert.
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Date: 6/6/2011 10:38:00 PM
Very cute way of voicing opinion, like someone from the old Empire dominion, Our big flying foxes squalk all night, and plaster the car, crimson /white, and its good paint too. Joe sent me a little verse, nothing bad n nuttin worse, n bombulator was slang for auto here in the 60s... great rhyming babe ... xo Don
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Date: 6/4/2011 1:39:00 AM
Just been catching up a little and found this. Seems like you have all the attributes that are usually attributed to us rhyming poets!............. I love it when people tell the truth! (:
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Date: 6/2/2011 12:43:00 AM
grats on your awesome contest entry Luv*Skat
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Date: 6/1/2011 12:18:00 PM
Hey there Delysia, congratulations on your win in Pd's contest.. ;) try and stay warm seems like it's another cold night ahead ;)
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Date: 6/1/2011 11:56:00 AM
Very cute and funny piece,,enjoyed your first poem on soup Delysia.. Congrats on your awesome win..thanks for your sweet comments on mine..love, gautami
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Date: 6/1/2011 7:13:00 AM
Congrats on your win, delysia. Excellent piece. Great job. xxxRalph
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Date: 6/1/2011 6:59:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d. delysia
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Date: 6/1/2011 5:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in P.D.'s contest Delysia. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2011 11:04:00 PM
Delysia~ CONGRATULATIONS!! In my contest, and thank you for supporting my contest. I had a great time reading and judging every entry in my contest. Thanks for being among all my chosen winners. have a great one,.. Poet D.
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Delysia Hendricks
Date: 5/31/2011 11:33:00 PM
No, all thanks to you, especially since I let you know that was not my very first submission. I'll get round the techno side of things yet. I'll be entering your new contest as well and hope to not bungle it again. lol I'm sure you must have had a good time reading and judging. There were some crackers in that lot. Great one, PD.
Date: 5/31/2011 9:51:00 PM
This sure is a very intriguing and unique read, Delysia :) enjoyed this one and super congrats on your win :)
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Date: 5/31/2011 9:25:00 PM
congrats delysia on a wonderful win in this contest luv.. enjoy sweet success...
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Date: 5/31/2011 8:34:00 PM
A very interesting one, Delysia. I really enjoyed this. Congats on your first post and a winner!
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Date: 5/26/2011 6:41:00 AM
This was a pleasure to digest.....good luck with the woodblock :)
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Date: 5/25/2011 12:16:00 PM
Great, thought provoking write Delysia! A truly talented poet my friend! Thank you for your comments on my work... Lay
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Date: 4/28/2011 12:55:00 AM
Pity the poor woodblock. Good piece of satire!
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