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Season providing greater work-fulfillment, Spring ushers toward opportunities for creativity wonders, opens outdoor exercise routines; indeed allowing natural Vitamin D basking, midst health and wellness’ fortification.
bright morning delights body vibrantly active blissful commencements
Surely a tranquil period to watch avian influx, it brings wondrous joy while listening to Spring birds’ symphony, invigorating with peace along melodious chirps of cheerful greetings --- expressing inspiration for new beginnings.
chickadee whistles cardinal melodic sounds carols that blend well
Sprouting green leaves reverberate message of newness midst buds' emergence, declaring births while flowers in bloom radiate with growth-triumph along gardens that reveal bounty of nature, producing vegetables in their verdant hues.
daffodils blossom delightful tulips greet with mirth declare vernal glows
Shouts of praise my heart exclaims to God for Spring blessings reviving, restoring, and even rejuvenating faith with His goodness and grace; and though I reside in the Tropics, devoid of this Season’s experience; still, I’m awed beholding its magnificence --- virtually.
fragrance wafting hope* freshness of pleasant thriving flourishing re-births
*Titus 1:2 In hope of eternal life, which God, that cannot lie, promised before the world began." March 29, 2021 Modified Haibun with alliteration Edited on June 20, 2022

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Date: 5/2/2021 8:26:00 AM
This is a splendid Haibun dear sis, Beata. You did it creatively well to describe our God's magnificent work! To God be the Glory! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always!Hugs.
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