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Written: December 23, 2023, For Chetta Achara Contest ________________________________________ A wide space to link sky and ground with a jolt of bright strike as it slices through the scene. a trace of ozone. The yard breeze softly blows, while rain has fallen upon the ground. butterflies can't thrive in dearth of blooms, birds can't soar in lack of wings. yet, raw life sprouts in shape of blooming grandeur and soaring grace. the dazzling moon lilts. as its light tendrils quiver. across undulating waves. alone, I endure. breathe in the briny sea breeze as my soul glistens with zeal 1/ Shadorma - 2/ Sijo - 3/ Sedoka

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Date: 12/27/2023 2:05:00 PM
Dear Sotto. How nice to read you again after a while. This is a delightful poem for my senses to enjoy. This is also so true. Life always has its way, so nature does. There is a wild part ready for destroying but at the same time nature finds its wonders to show us again. It's like we say....It has an ace up its sleeve. Loved thisxxxx
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Date: 12/24/2023 5:36:00 AM
Masterful depiction, my friend. You weaved the three forms to create a splendorous portrait-- seamlessly flowing words! WIN BIG!
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Date: 12/23/2023 9:40:00 PM
Very nice, Lasaad!
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Date: 12/23/2023 6:24:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem, especially the last line that states "as my soul glistens with zeal."
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Date: 12/23/2023 4:39:00 PM
a magnificent creation, dear Sotto. I like how the three forms flow together so smoothly. I'm not familiar with the Shadorma form. Looks intriguing. You words are an eloquent masterpiece paying tribute to nature. Am faving this one too, have a pleasant evening, Sara
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