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Wonderful

Warm wind on my face; warm water surrounding me.

Off the coast - blue sky above - a ship sets out to sea.

Nothing I have ever done could be as nice as this.

Dance, swim with dolphins, sightsee, shop or laze in bliss!

Entertainment’s everywhere; excitement fills the air.

Rest; revive; rejoice!  There’s something for everyone.

Food is limitless, and so are the ways to have fun.

Underneath the sun you can chase away your blues.

Land Ahoy!  How I hate to leave my ocean cruise. 


Written Jan. 7, 2015 (This was ABSOLUTELY the most wonderful vacation I ever had!! My first and only cruise, back in 2000)

Copyright © Andrea Dietrich | Year Posted 2016

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/23/2016 12:09:00 AM ANDREA, Congratulations on your Wonderful-Acrostic win. Hugs --Linda-- Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 1/13/2016 7:52:00 AM Hi! my lovely friend, a great congratulation to you on your win with this beautiful poem. Loved always,bl Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 1/13/2016 1:18:00 AM Yet another wonderful win Andrea.. big congrats! Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 1/12/2016 11:51:00 PM Andrea,, Congrats on your Wonderful-Acrostic. ** SKAT Login to Reply

Viv Wigley Date: 1/12/2016 10:35:00 PM Sounds great, Andrea. next time you go, let me know, and I'll send you a six foot by three foot suitcase. Promise not to open it until you're on board :) . Great write, congrats! Viv x Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 1/12/2016 3:34:00 PM It sounds divine Andrea. Congratulations on your placement! Hugs, Connie Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 1/12/2016 12:43:00 PM Congrats on a wonderful win Andrea Login to Reply

Caryl Muzzey Date: 1/12/2016 11:02:00 AM Congratulations on your win with this beautiful write. Caryl Login to Reply

Beautiful Scars Date: 1/12/2016 10:11:00 AM Andrea, congrats on your placement!! *smiles* -luloo Login to Reply

Hansteven Selfa Date: 1/12/2016 7:51:00 AM Truly wonderful! Congratulations on your win Andrea! Login to Reply

John Hamilton Date: 1/12/2016 7:08:00 AM Very nice acrostic Andrea! Everyone is really stepping up and getting better at these! Congrats on your fine win! Login to Reply

Jennifer Walker Date: 1/11/2016 9:24:00 AM Hope that you have a time to travel to your hearts content one day. Login to Reply

Lindsay Laurie Date: 1/11/2016 12:46:00 AM Hello Andrea ... what is wonderful Andrea, is the fact that you took us along on your memory lane - Ta - Lindsay Login to Reply

Sarah Stein Date: 1/10/2016 7:04:00 PM Wow, such beautiful description of your vacation. Thank you for sharing. Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 1/10/2016 5:19:00 AM Well i think the title says everything about this poem Andrea...Just Wonderful Login to Reply

Kp Nunez Date: 1/10/2016 2:18:00 AM This is wonderfully upbeat ...and the experience that inspired you to write this one is memorable indeed! Best to you, Andie! Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 1/9/2016 7:21:00 PM A tropical adventure on the high seas!...Nice write Andrea Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/9/2016 4:43:00 PM .............. wish I was there ........ lovely poem and vacation, Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

White Sage Date: 1/9/2016 3:56:00 PM excellent write, a nice vacation that is... Login to Reply

David Mohn Date: 1/9/2016 3:53:00 PM this does sound "wonderful" Andrea...I've always wanted to try one myself. Login to Reply

CayCay Jennings Date: 1/9/2016 12:06:00 PM I love this and got the feeling it was true while I read it. I deleted mine and I'm okay with doing so. Your wonderful is beautiful ... CayCay Login to Reply

Caryl Muzzey Date: 1/9/2016 11:23:00 AM Great write Andrea, it makes me want to cruse alone with you. Best to you in the contest, I enjoyed the read~ Caryl Login to Reply

Jill Spagnola Date: 1/9/2016 11:21:00 AM Andrea I love the way you used this form to pen a picture of your awesome vacation! Totally original and your trip is immortalized with your verse! Love it...:), jill Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 1/9/2016 11:11:00 AM There you go, girl. :) You turn any poem into a piece of beauty...I guess our hopes for placing well....SANK! ;) HA HA! Hugs, Andrea. I LOVE swimming...so anything that has to do with water...floats my boat. :) Hugs Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 1/9/2016 10:32:00 AM Ive only been on one and it was wonderful..to Alaska..the scenery was gorgeous. Glad you enjoyed yours and hope you enjoy a win. BG Login to Reply