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glorious pictures of a Carnival Cruise 

Wonderful

Warm wind on my face; warm water surrounding me.

Off the coast - blue sky above - a ship sets out to sea.

Nothing I have ever done could be as nice as this.

Dance, swim with dolphins, sightsee, shop or laze in bliss!

Entertainment’s everywhere; excitement fills the air.

Rest; revive; rejoice!  There’s something for everyone.

Food is limitless, and so are the ways to have fun.

Underneath the sun you can chase away your blues.

Land Ahoy!  How I hate to leave my ocean cruise. 


Written Jan. 7, 2015 (This was ABSOLUTELY the most wonderful vacation I ever had!! My first and only cruise, back in 2000)
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A   Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 12:09 AM
ANDREA, Congratulations on your Wonderful-Acrostic win. Hugs --Linda--
Devnath  Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 7:52 AM
Hi! my lovely friend, a great congratulation to you on your win with this beautiful poem. Loved always,bl
A. Sharma Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 1:18 AM
Yet another wonderful win Andrea.. big congrats!
A  Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 11:51 PM
Andrea,, Congrats on your Wonderful-Acrostic. ** SKAT
Wigley Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 10:35 PM
Sounds great, Andrea. next time you go, let me know, and I'll send you a six foot by three foot suitcase. Promise not to open it until you're on board :) . Great write, congrats! Viv x
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 3:34 PM
It sounds divine Andrea. Congratulations on your placement! Hugs, Connie
May Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 12:43 PM
Congrats on a wonderful win Andrea
Muzzey Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 11:02 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful write. Caryl
Scars Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 10:11 AM
Andrea, congrats on your placement!! *smiles* -luloo
Selfa Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 7:51 AM
Truly wonderful! Congratulations on your win Andrea!
Hamilton Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 7:08 AM
Very nice acrostic Andrea! Everyone is really stepping up and getting better at these! Congrats on your fine win!
Walker Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 9:24 AM
Hope that you have a time to travel to your hearts content one day.
Laurie Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 12:46 AM
Hello Andrea ... what is wonderful Andrea, is the fact that you took us along on your memory lane - Ta - Lindsay
Stein Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 7:04 PM
Wow, such beautiful description of your vacation. Thank you for sharing.
Horsman Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 5:19 AM
Well i think the title says everything about this poem Andrea...Just Wonderful
Nunez Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 2:18 AM
This is wonderfully upbeat ...and the experience that inspired you to write this one is memorable indeed! Best to you, Andie!
May Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 7:21 PM
A tropical adventure on the high seas!...Nice write Andrea
Andresen Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 4:43 PM
.............. wish I was there ........ lovely poem and vacation, Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sage Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 3:56 PM
excellent write, a nice vacation that is...
Mohn Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 3:53 PM
this does sound "wonderful" Andrea...I've always wanted to try one myself.
Godwin Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 12:06 PM
I love this and got the feeling it was true while I read it. I deleted mine and I'm okay with doing so. Your wonderful is beautiful ... CayCay
Muzzey Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 11:23 AM
Great write Andrea, it makes me want to cruse alone with you. Best to you in the contest, I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
Spagnola Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 11:21 AM
Andrea I love the way you used this form to pen a picture of your awesome vacation! Totally original and your trip is immortalized with your verse! Love it...:), jill
Manassian Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 11:11 AM
There you go, girl. :) You turn any poem into a piece of beauty...I guess our hopes for placing well....SANK! ;) HA HA! Hugs, Andrea. I LOVE swimming...so anything that has to do with water...floats my boat. :) Hugs
Gorelick Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 10:32 AM
Ive only been on one and it was wonderful..to Alaska..the scenery was gorgeous. Glad you enjoyed yours and hope you enjoy a win. BG
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