Wonderful

World of wonder and grace Blues Ocean’s foam green hues a silent love in a canoe Nature’s blooms transfuse as we lie embraced Dreams continues to rendezvous in our hearts subdued Eyes Azul melting look in the moonlit night pearl Relinquished of its frail cloudy veil Faraway the fawning celestial sky Unafraid of unblinking space Love surrenders to the wonderful un-erased world 1/5/2016 Poetry Contest: Wonderful-Acrostic Sponsored by: John Hamilton

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/23/2016 12:06:00 AM

EVE, Congratulations on your Wonderful-Acrostic win. Hugs --Linda--

Archana Garg

Date: 1/16/2016 6:11:00 AM

Wonderfully written Acrostic Eve...fourth line is my fav.

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/13/2016 12:33:00 PM

An excellent poem and loved the last line which is very sweet my lovely friend. Congrats on your win. Loved always,bl

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/13/2016 8:26:00 AM

Dropping back to congratulate you Eve, you have captured a wonderful feeling of tranquility in this romantic poem and one's mind can picture what the words paint on the page. Emile.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/13/2016 12:56:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning work Eve!!

Skat A

Date: 1/12/2016 11:45:00 PM

Eve,, Congrats on your Wonderful-Acrostic. ** SKAT

Viv Wigley

Date: 1/12/2016 10:17:00 PM

Lovely piece, Eve, and I've never come across Azul before- I learn something new every day. Congrats, Viv x

Eve Roper
Date: 1/12/2016 10:33:00 PM

Spanish for blue ( Azul) thank you, Viv!

Lu Loo

Date: 1/12/2016 10:07:00 AM

Eve, congrats on your placement in the contest!! *smiles*-luloo

Eve Roper
Date: 1/12/2016 10:55:00 AM

Thanks you for your constant support and inspiration. Appreciate your kind visits to my page, Laura.

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 1/12/2016 7:46:00 AM

Eve, congratulations on your well-deserved placement! :) Hope you the best all throughout.

Eve Roper
Date: 1/12/2016 10:59:00 AM

Thanks you, Hansteven, appreciate your kind visits to my page and the congratulations.

John Hamilton

Date: 1/12/2016 6:34:00 AM

Just a delight to read this excellent acrostic Eve37/40. Congrats on your shared 3rd place win!

Eve Roper
Date: 1/12/2016 10:58:00 AM

Thank you, John, I do enjoy the challenge! You made my day hugs dear friend.

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/8/2016 5:09:00 PM

Your words eloquently sum up the feelings that your poem releases to the page, wonderful! Emile.

Eve Roper
Date: 1/12/2016 10:56:00 AM

Thanks you for your constant support and inspiration. Appreciate your kind visits to my page,Emile.

White Sage

Date: 1/6/2016 3:16:00 PM

excellent write Eve, wish you the best for the contest

Eve Roper
Date: 1/7/2016 10:22:00 PM

Thank you, White, for you support.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/6/2016 12:45:00 PM

ohh, this is so moving, eve.. great stuff!..huggs

Eve Roper
Date: 1/7/2016 10:21:00 PM

Oh, Nette, thank you coming from you that is an honor! Hugs

Kp Nunez

Date: 1/6/2016 9:28:00 AM

Compelling imagery here, Eve. I like your acrostic. There's one thing...mail :-)

Eve Roper
Date: 1/6/2016 10:06:00 AM

Thank you, Kim, Hugs Eve

Eric Boddie

Date: 1/6/2016 8:43:00 AM

the wonderful un-erased world....that line is so inspiring my dear girl....but us country folk know Beauty best....just look at our natural environment, you cant help but be impressed....;)

Eve Roper
Date: 1/6/2016 10:06:00 AM

Always love your visits

Eve Roper
Date: 1/6/2016 10:05:00 AM

I'm from Oregon, where the tall pine grow, thousands of water falls and rivers flow, rain forests, evergreen forests, alpine forests and endless pastures of wild flowers, and the wild life is just amazing.