Wonderful

World of wonder and grace Blues

Ocean’s foam green hues a silent love in a canoe

Nature’s blooms transfuse as we lie embraced  

Dreams continues to rendezvous  in our hearts subdued

Eyes Azul melting look in the moonlit night pearl

Relinquished of its frail cloudy veil

Faraway the fawning celestial sky 

Unafraid of unblinking space

Love surrenders to the wonderful un-erased world



1/5/2016

Poetry Contest:  Wonderful-Acrostic 
Sponsored by: John Hamilton

loveskyworldacrostic

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Poet Destroyer A

January 23, 2016 at 12:06 AM

EVE, Congratulations on your Wonderful-Acrostic win. Hugs --Linda--

Archana Garg

January 16, 2016 at 6:11 AM

Wonderfully written Acrostic Eve...fourth line is my fav.

Bl Devnath

January 13, 2016 at 12:33 PM

An excellent poem and loved the last line which is very sweet my lovely friend. Congrats on your win. Loved always,bl

Emile Pinet

January 13, 2016 at 8:26 AM

Dropping back to congratulate you Eve, you have captured a wonderful feeling of tranquility in this romantic poem and one's mind can picture what the words paint on the page. Emile.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

January 13, 2016 at 12:56 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning work Eve!!

Skat A

January 12, 2016 at 11:45 PM

Eve,, Congrats on your Wonderful-Acrostic. ** SKAT

Viv Wigley

January 12, 2016 at 10:17 PM

Lovely piece, Eve, and I've never come across Azul before- I learn something new every day. Congrats, Viv x

Eve Roper

January 12, 2016 at 10:33 PM

Spanish for blue ( Azul) thank you, Viv!

Beautiful Scars

January 12, 2016 at 10:07 AM

Eve, congrats on your placement in the contest!! *smiles*-luloo

Eve Roper

January 12, 2016 at 10:55 AM

Thanks you for your constant support and inspiration. Appreciate your kind visits to my page, Laura.

Hansteven Selfa

January 12, 2016 at 7:46 AM

Eve, congratulations on your well-deserved placement! :) Hope you the best all throughout.

Eve Roper

January 12, 2016 at 10:59 AM

Thanks you, Hansteven, appreciate your kind visits to my page and the congratulations.

John Hamilton

January 12, 2016 at 6:34 AM

Just a delight to read this excellent acrostic Eve37/40. Congrats on your shared 3rd place win!

Eve Roper

January 12, 2016 at 10:58 AM

Thank you, John, I do enjoy the challenge! You made my day hugs dear friend.

Emile Pinet

January 8, 2016 at 5:09 PM

Your words eloquently sum up the feelings that your poem releases to the page, wonderful! Emile.

Eve Roper

January 12, 2016 at 10:56 AM

Thanks you for your constant support and inspiration. Appreciate your kind visits to my page,Emile.

White Sage

January 6, 2016 at 3:16 PM

excellent write Eve, wish you the best for the contest

Eve Roper

January 7, 2016 at 10:22 PM

Thank you, White, for you support.

Nette Onclaud

January 6, 2016 at 12:45 PM

ohh, this is so moving, eve.. great stuff!..huggs

Eve Roper

January 7, 2016 at 10:21 PM

Oh, Nette, thank you coming from you that is an honor! Hugs

Kp Nunez

January 6, 2016 at 9:28 AM

Compelling imagery here, Eve. I like your acrostic. There's one thing...mail :-)

Eve Roper

January 6, 2016 at 10:06 AM

Thank you, Kim, Hugs Eve

Eric Boddie

January 6, 2016 at 8:43 AM

the wonderful un-erased world....that line is so inspiring my dear girl....but us country folk know Beauty best....just look at our natural environment, you cant help but be impressed....;)

Eve Roper

January 6, 2016 at 10:06 AM

Always love your visits

Eve Roper

January 6, 2016 at 10:05 AM

I'm from Oregon, where the tall pine grow, thousands of water falls and rivers flow, rain forests, evergreen forests, alpine forests and endless pastures of wild flowers, and the wild life is just amazing.