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Wonderful

What wonder can compare to what you are?
Omniscient is your beauty and your grace.
Nuancing passion, pulsing like a star
Delightful to my eyes- your form, your face!
Embellished is my life with words from you.
Reality and dreams in them abide.
Fullment of desire, I taste anew.
Unchaste the thoughts of you that in me bide.
Luxuriant is life because of YOU!

January 5, 2015
Contest: Wonderful Acrostic
Sponsor: John Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lamoureux Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 9:24 AM
See congrats are in order. It is really well expressed.
Hicks Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 12:56 AM
Wonderful pen, but more wonderful the poet. Your words resonate of joy and exaltation.
Godwin Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 10:18 PM
I love your acrostic and I'm happy to see it placed well - it should have ... CayCay
Dietrich Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 7:34 PM
Your entry was so good, Eileen. congrats for your well deserved win.
Devnath  Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 7:39 AM
Hi! my lovely friend, a great congratulation to you on your win with this beautiful poem. Loved always,bl
Manassian Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 10:13 AM
I'm sorry I'm late with my response to your post, my dear. I've been ill. I appreciate the visit. :)
A. Sharma Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 12:55 AM
Wow Eileen.. truly wonderful write.. a super 7 n hugs.. no wonder its a win.. big congrats!!
Manassian Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 10:15 AM
Thank you, my dear Dr. Upma. I'm so glad to receive your visit. Hugs
Wigley Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 10:12 PM
I love it when you write poems about me,Eileen, and with a subject like that it's bound to be a winning write. Congratulations, Viv x
Manassian Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 10:14 AM
Thanks for your visit to my acrostic, Viv. I'm sorry I couldn't respond earlier as I was not well. Hugs
La France Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 12:05 PM
Eileen, this is a beautifully written acrostic and congratulations on your placement
Manassian Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 10:18 AM
Thank you, Broken Wings. So good to have this visit. I'm sorry I'm late with my response as I was sick. Blessings.
Selfa Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 7:45 AM
Eileen, congratulations on your well-deserved placement! :) Hope you the best all throughout.
Manassian Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 10:20 AM
Thank you for your kind visit to my work.
Hamilton Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 6:28 AM
What an amazing acrostic 37/40 Eileen Thank you for participating in my contest!
Manassian Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 10:22 AM
Thanks ever so much for my wonderful placement in your contest. It is much appreciated. I'm sorry I'm late with my response. I've been ill. Blessings.
Dietrich Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 8:41 PM
wow, Eileen. I love how you came up with special words for a wonderful love. Mine is not romantic at all (not posted yet either) haha
Lamoureux Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 7:37 PM
Perfect!
Lamoureux Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 9:33 AM
You forgot the O second line. The Pom however is a stunner! Hugs Rick.
Manassian Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 9:42 AM
YOU ARE AMAZING!!! Imagine that! HA HA HA HA HA!!!! I'm a crazy one! The antibiotics have fried my brain. THANKS, RICHARD!!!
Lamoureux Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 9:34 AM
Oops it looks like I forgot my e in poem.
Y. Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 9:14 AM
Eileen, you have penned a beautiful write with a great message. I'm sure I'll see in the winner's circle with this piece. Best of luck in the contest-Alexis 7
Manassian Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 12:04 PM
Thanks, dear. You are so kind. I appreciate it. Hugs.
Andresen Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 8:35 AM
- I must say it's beautiful, really wonderful dear Eileen - Good luck in contest, I give you a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Manassian Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 8:45 AM
Here you are, Sunshine. It's a very old day in Beirut, but you warm my heart. Thanks for the visit. Hugs
Sage Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 7:22 AM
excellent write for someone so great, wish you the best for the contest dear
Manassian Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 8:44 AM
Thank you, WS. In Poetry...everyone can be that perfect larger than life person. That's what is beautiful about writing. Hugs
Trifiatis Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 4:30 AM
A monumental hymn to the wonderful person of your dreams, dearest Eileen! A seven!
Manassian Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 4:33 AM
Thank you, my dear esteemed poet. You are so kind.
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