Wonderful

Women, wonderful existing creature like the wren 
Obliging ones, sweet and placating, best to make friends
Nevus nymphs, regulating the heartbeats, an ornament to the soul, such flower
Daintily dabbing the heart with sugary delight, such lover
Elegant emblem of future, a land that enclose seeds, bosom of nectars, a mother
Resplendent ray of hope she is, respectable redeemer of tomorrow, the future weaver
Fabulous fairy, such a divine favour to the world, a sister
Unstinting unconditional care, soft heart, vast mind, and many uncountable other
Ladies, lamp of the world...what more is wonderful? They are friends, wives, mothers, sisters, daughters...(the best) 




For contest: WONDERFUL ACROSTIC
sponsored by: JOHN HAMILTON



And...

To all women out there...proud of ya all
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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January 26, 2016 at 7:16 AM
Why, White Sage, thank you more for the beautiful compliment on my thank you for your reply. You just made me blush. And it's not easy to make me blush. I have a new poem. About the beauty and struggles of life after breast cancer. Stop by if you'd like. You've always been so kind to my poetic heart. Hugs... Linda
A   Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 9:53 PM
WHITE SAGE, THANK YOU for blessing my comment with a reply. THAT WAS NICE OF YOU!!! PD**
Sage Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 3:21 AM
you're always welcome dear Linda...and as a fact, you're one proof to the fact that women are wonderful
A   Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 12:11 AM
White Sage, Congratulations on your Wonderful-Acrostic win. Hugs --Linda--
Sage Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 11:34 AM
thanks Linda, i appreciate your comment
Dietrich Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 7:40 PM
Glad to see this one again. I was rereading it and thinking how special you made us women sound!! Congrats.
Sage Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 7:59 PM
thanks Andrea...women are simply wonderful
A. Sharma Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 1:26 AM
Wonderful acrostic n win white sage.. big congrats! Thanks for ur kind visit to my page!
Sage Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 8:20 AM
am glad you came by...thanks
A  Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 11:53 PM
White Sage, Congrats on your Wonderful-Acrostic. ** SKAT
Sage Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 8:22 AM
thanks for the comment Skat
Hamilton Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 4:08 PM
Very interesting double acrostic, thanks for participating, and congrats on your fine placement.
Sage Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 4:19 PM
thanks John...
Scars Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 10:14 AM
Very creative white sage, congrats on your placement *smiles*
Sage Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 10:28 AM
thanks Laura
Selfa Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 7:53 AM
Truly wonderful! Congratulations on your win!
Sage Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 9:11 AM
thanks Hansteven
Legend Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 6:09 PM
i love this
Sage Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 7:41 PM
yeah, that's because your eyes aren't blind to the beauty of WOMEN, thanks dear friend for coming by
A  Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 5:20 PM
Hello, White Sage, Yes, thank you for noticing and expressing this one for the women. Dynamite alliteration... the best one I've read... SKAT
Sage Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 5:44 PM
Women are so wonderful i mean...
Sage Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 5:34 PM
thanks for coming by Skat, women have are wonderful...
Gorelick Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 4:05 PM
What a clever way to do this contest. I think I love you...! lol. BG
Sage Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 4:41 PM
thanks Barbara, women are great because they share that tender love for nature, and that too naturally...you've just proven it...am glad you came by
Dietrich Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 4:01 PM
WONDERFUL tribute to WOMANKIND!!!
Sage Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 4:39 PM
yeah, because they are special...thanks for coming by
Trifiatis Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 1:42 PM
After that dear, White Sage, all women will adore you and rightly so! I agree with you that without them not only beauty and love would have been impossible but life itself as well! A seven!
Sage Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 3:30 PM
thanks Demetrios, you summarised the poem with your lovely words
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 4:00 AM
Wow! This entry is so impressive. Excellent! I hope to see this poem take top honors my friend! Have a blessed 2016! 7
Sage Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 7:16 AM
thanks Connie, am glad you came by
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 3:19 AM
White Sage, love this empowering, beautiful dedications to us women!. I hope it will do well in the contest~~Olive Eloisa =`)
Sage Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 7:13 AM
thanks Olive, i appreciate your wishes
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 5:24 PM
Like an ode to women, you have penned a gem. thanks for stopping by my page with your warmth.
Sage Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 7:06 AM
Its a pleasure having you come by too
Manassian Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 5:01 PM
Very wonderful tribute! I'm impressed. Good luck in the contest.
Sage Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 7:05 AM
Thanks for coming by dear Eileen
Allison Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 4:17 PM
a wonderful tribute and I love the alliteration:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Sage Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 4:40 PM
thanks Jan, am glad you loved it...
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