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Women Versus Woman, 2016

Love ones; excuse these urges I now purge, The brief kiss that always exits her door, The encore of lust, no permanent words. But I must tour, cure this curious lure. The plural roses, sweet culprits, steal me. I yearn to multiply this term called queen; Perhaps the youth of man, tricks thee, Yet this passion married to thrill seems keen. And while these eyes may add, still fond I am. Fond of the rare court, she will always be, The way she humbles, this lesser term of man. Yes, now I may spread, but retire? Yes to thee. I pray this case settles before long, And wins her promise: fate is never wrong.

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Date: 6/7/2020 8:16:00 AM
I hope fate has been kind to you. You express passion eloquently.
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Date: 8/1/2017 6:12:00 AM
Well written, Jiril. I liked it.
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 10/1/2017 2:08:00 PM
Thank you Celine. Appreciate the love.
Date: 9/14/2016 8:02:00 AM
A Sonnet sunset in a passionate sky! 7 My best, chuck
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 10/16/2016 10:04:00 PM
Thank you Chuck.
Date: 9/10/2016 2:29:00 AM
Your last line is mind blowing....well done, Jiril, jimbo
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 10/16/2016 10:04:00 PM
Thank you James. Appreciate the love.

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