Women:

Perfect she was in her poise,

Beautiful as the night sky,

She was tender in her touch,

Love was in her heart.

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/18/2017 4:49:00 PM

Sounds perfect thank you for such a wonderful opinion.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/31/2017 5:18:00 PM

Beautiful poem, WW, congratulations on your win ~*

Paul Callus

Date: 5/31/2017 4:51:00 PM

A woman after a man's heart, WW!! Congratulations on this fine win. Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/30/2017 9:36:00 PM

Lovely, WW! Congrats!

White Wolf
Date: 5/31/2017 12:02:00 AM

Thanks a bunch, Kim /|\

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/30/2017 4:23:00 PM

Lovely tribute to a lovely woman, White Wolf. Congratulations on your fine win! Sandra

White Wolf
Date: 5/30/2017 7:01:00 PM

Thank you very much, Sandra /|\

Curtis Johnson

Date: 4/13/2017 6:52:00 PM

Well said. Would to God that all men everywhere could see such beauty in women. GBU.

White Wolf
Date: 4/13/2017 7:37:00 PM

Thank you for your comment, Curtis /|\

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 4/13/2017 7:49:00 AM

What a lovely poem.

White Wolf
Date: 4/13/2017 8:16:00 AM

Thank you very much, Afolabi /|\

Darren White

Date: 4/13/2017 12:11:00 AM

So beautiful Budgie :) Lovingly penned, you're good at these!

White Wolf
Date: 4/13/2017 12:14:00 AM

I'm starting to enjoy many of the different forms now, thanks, matey /|\

Doug Vinson

Date: 4/12/2017 8:29:00 AM

A good view, Budgie. And it feels easily done. : )

White Wolf
Date: 4/12/2017 9:11:00 PM

It was probably the quickest poem I have ever done! New avatar, Doug? Still on the sheep theme I see! Ha /|\

Chris Green

Date: 4/12/2017 6:06:00 AM

What a beautiful poem filled with love and admiration. Nicely done my friend.

White Wolf
Date: 4/12/2017 9:09:00 PM

Thanks, Chris! It was my first attempt at this form /|\

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/12/2017 5:01:00 AM

Hello White Wolf. Thank you for introducing me to this format. I did look it up and you executed it perfectly. Your words are more than lovely. As a woman I thank you for your words and thoughts. Have a wonderful day. Well done

White Wolf
Date: 4/12/2017 9:08:00 PM

Thank you so much, Lisa /|\