Women:

Perfect she was in her poise,

Beautiful as the night sky,

She was tender in her touch,

Love was in her heart.

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Patricia Cresswell

September 18, 2017 at 4:49 PM

Sounds perfect thank you for such a wonderful opinion.

Eve Roper

May 31, 2017 at 5:18 PM

Beautiful poem, WW, congratulations on your win ~*

Paul Callus

May 31, 2017 at 4:51 PM

A woman after a man's heart, WW!! Congratulations on this fine win. Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues

May 30, 2017 at 9:36 PM

Lovely, WW! Congrats!

White Wolf

May 31, 2017 at 12:02 AM

Thanks a bunch, Kim /|\

Sandra Haight

May 30, 2017 at 4:23 PM

Lovely tribute to a lovely woman, White Wolf. Congratulations on your fine win! Sandra

White Wolf

May 30, 2017 at 7:01 PM

Thank you very much, Sandra /|\

Curtis Johnson

April 13, 2017 at 6:52 PM

Well said. Would to God that all men everywhere could see such beauty in women. GBU.

White Wolf

April 13, 2017 at 7:37 PM

Thank you for your comment, Curtis /|\

Afolabi Muideen

April 13, 2017 at 7:49 AM

What a lovely poem.

White Wolf

April 13, 2017 at 8:16 AM

Thank you very much, Afolabi /|\

Darren White

April 13, 2017 at 12:11 AM

So beautiful Budgie :) Lovingly penned, you're good at these!

White Wolf

April 13, 2017 at 12:14 AM

I'm starting to enjoy many of the different forms now, thanks, matey /|\

Doug Vinson

April 12, 2017 at 8:29 AM

A good view, Budgie. And it feels easily done. : )

White Wolf

April 12, 2017 at 9:11 PM

It was probably the quickest poem I have ever done! New avatar, Doug? Still on the sheep theme I see! Ha /|\

Chris Green

April 12, 2017 at 6:06 AM

What a beautiful poem filled with love and admiration. Nicely done my friend.

White Wolf

April 12, 2017 at 9:09 PM

Thanks, Chris! It was my first attempt at this form /|\

Lisa Ricci

April 12, 2017 at 5:01 AM

Hello White Wolf. Thank you for introducing me to this format. I did look it up and you executed it perfectly. Your words are more than lovely. As a woman I thank you for your words and thoughts. Have a wonderful day. Well done

White Wolf

April 12, 2017 at 9:08 PM

Thank you so much, Lisa /|\