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This poem was inspired by the form introduced by Gigno.

Crystals fall From her eyes Strong defense Man’s heart melts Knees are bent Gives his best (Form of this poem: Ellip) Honorable Mention Contest: Latest Poem Judged: 6/9/13 Sponsor: Poet Nathan

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/14/2013 6:40:00 PM

Hello, Sweet Leo... thank you so much for the lovely comment on my newest poem. I'm glad you got to read and enjoy it. I know you have such little time on the soup... having you stop by my poem, means much to me when it comes to my poetry world. it's an honor every time i see you around my poems.. xox~ your sis Linda

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/17/2013 8:42:00 AM

This is wonderful....a new form for me. Congrats!!!! Thanks for your comment on my PD poem. :-D Sweet of you!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 6/16/2013 7:01:00 PM

Hi; I don't understand that form, but it's beautiful. Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 6/16/2013 4:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful Ellip and for leaving me a lovely congratulatory comment for PD's contest. Much appreciated. I hope you had a great weekend, warm Smiles, Connie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/16/2013 7:15:00 AM

......is actually ellip for it stands for thoughts continued for you to fill in or the author has not completed their thought..Great ones though..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are uplifting..Sara..Oh! I had forgotten about this form..

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/13/2013 11:25:00 AM

Congrats on your win my friend with this beautiful poem. Loved always, bl

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 6/11/2013 6:12:00 AM

Congrats on your win my dear friend....It's an awesome poem of yours again..Have a blessed day always :) Maria

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/10/2013 9:43:00 AM

This is so nice and cute. love phyl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/10/2013 9:24:00 AM

Hello sweet sis, a nice poem... glad to see it was one of Nathan's choice. Congratulations with your nice HM poem... love~ LINDA

Vandana Sharma

Date: 6/9/2013 11:15:00 PM

Wow! short and sweet

Nathan D.

Date: 6/9/2013 9:19:00 PM

thank you' Nate

Monterey Sirak

Date: 6/9/2013 4:59:00 AM

Beauty and emotion presented with a few well chosen words. Love it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2013 11:39:00 PM

Just stopping by to say HI

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/7/2013 4:28:00 PM

Hi, Leo... wish you could hang around the soup during the day with me.. we would have a blast.. yes, i am bored... hugs... Linda

... Gigno

Date: 6/5/2013 10:03:00 PM

!!!

Simon S.

Date: 6/5/2013 12:52:00 PM

beautiful poem

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/5/2013 7:51:00 AM

Good morning Leo, stopping by your lovely ellip form again. a delicate yet strong defense in a women. I like the Crystal fall look. thank you for the morning hugs on my page this morning. always~ Linda

Constance La France

Date: 6/4/2013 9:26:00 AM

Leonora, this is a lovely poem and a nice form, well done and I want to thank you so much for my placement in your A Home Contest, I am very honoured, constance

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/3/2013 1:31:00 PM

magandang araw, leonora.. what a fine gem and form.. you took me there with your flowing words so sashaying gently on my mind... guess what?.. might be in BKK 3rd week of june...take care; will update you... :) huggs

John Loving Iii

Date: 6/3/2013 9:50:00 AM

Both are good examples

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/3/2013 1:21:00 AM

Very nice thought. Your words are inspiring too. Enjoyed. Tfs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/2/2013 9:00:00 PM

Leo, I like that you are showing this for again. I kind of forgot about it... your poem is very strong, and breaks it all down to men are weak...lol.. I love it... sending you soup mail... LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/2/2013 8:58:00 PM

Hello My sweetest friend... this is me... LINDA.... pd... your poetry soup sis... I changed me name... Linda

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/1/2013 3:26:00 PM

to say so much in 9 syllables, is wonderful,, your words are inspiring...

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/30/2013 4:36:00 PM

not that up on forms not Japanese theirs are 5/7/5 as far as I am aware but what the heck lol, its a poem in its own right. I love the clarity and beauty of it a 7 from me Linda