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Woman

Crystals fall
From her eyes
Strong defense


Man’s heart melts
Knees are bent
Gives his best






(Form of this poem: Ellip)


Honorable Mention
Contest: Latest Poem
Judged: 6/9/13
Sponsor: Poet Nathan

Copyright © Len Gasun | Year Posted 2013

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/14/2013 6:40:00 PM Hello, Sweet Leo... thank you so much for the lovely comment on my newest poem. I'm glad you got to read and enjoy it. I know you have such little time on the soup... having you stop by my poem, means much to me when it comes to my poetry world. it's an honor every time i see you around my poems.. xox~ your sis Linda Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 6/17/2013 8:42:00 AM This is wonderful....a new form for me. Congrats!!!! Thanks for your comment on my PD poem. :-D Sweet of you! Login to Reply

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 6/16/2013 7:01:00 PM Hi; I don't understand that form, but it's beautiful. Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla Login to Reply

Connie Gildersleeve Date: 6/16/2013 4:59:00 PM Congratulations on your wonderful Ellip and for leaving me a lovely congratulatory comment for PD's contest. Much appreciated. I hope you had a great weekend, warm Smiles, Connie Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/16/2013 7:15:00 AM ......is actually ellip for it stands for thoughts continued for you to fill in or the author has not completed their thought..Great ones though..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are uplifting..Sara..Oh! I had forgotten about this form.. Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 6/13/2013 11:25:00 AM Congrats on your win my friend with this beautiful poem. Loved always, bl Login to Reply

Bukang Liwayway Date: 6/11/2013 6:12:00 AM Congrats on your win my dear friend....It's an awesome poem of yours again..Have a blessed day always :) Maria Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 6/10/2013 9:43:00 AM This is so nice and cute. love phyl Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/10/2013 9:24:00 AM Hello sweet sis, a nice poem... glad to see it was one of Nathan's choice. Congratulations with your nice HM poem... love~ LINDA Login to Reply

Dr. Vandana Sharma Date: 6/9/2013 11:15:00 PM Wow! short and sweet Login to Reply

Nathan D. Date: 6/9/2013 9:19:00 PM thank you' Nate Login to Reply

Monterey Sirak Date: 6/9/2013 4:59:00 AM Beauty and emotion presented with a few well chosen words. Love it. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/8/2013 11:39:00 PM Just stopping by to say HI Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/7/2013 4:28:00 PM Hi, Leo... wish you could hang around the soup during the day with me.. we would have a blast.. yes, i am bored... hugs... Linda Login to Reply

... Gigno Date: 6/5/2013 10:03:00 PM !!! Login to Reply

Simon S. Date: 6/5/2013 12:52:00 PM beautiful poem Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/5/2013 7:51:00 AM Good morning Leo, stopping by your lovely ellip form again. a delicate yet strong defense in a women. I like the Crystal fall look. thank you for the morning hugs on my page this morning. always~ Linda Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 6/4/2013 9:26:00 AM Leonora, this is a lovely poem and a nice form, well done and I want to thank you so much for my placement in your A Home Contest, I am very honoured, constance Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/3/2013 1:31:00 PM magandang araw, leonora.. what a fine gem and form.. you took me there with your flowing words so sashaying gently on my mind... guess what?.. might be in BKK 3rd week of june...take care; will update you... :) huggs Login to Reply

John Loving Iii Date: 6/3/2013 9:50:00 AM Both are good examples Login to Reply

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 6/3/2013 1:21:00 AM Very nice thought. Your words are inspiring too. Enjoyed. Tfs Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/2/2013 9:00:00 PM Leo, I like that you are showing this for again. I kind of forgot about it... your poem is very strong, and breaks it all down to men are weak...lol.. I love it... sending you soup mail... LINDA Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/2/2013 8:58:00 PM Hello My sweetest friend... this is me... LINDA.... pd... your poetry soup sis... I changed me name... Linda Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 6/1/2013 3:26:00 PM to say so much in 9 syllables, is wonderful,, your words are inspiring... Login to Reply

Shadow Hamilton Date: 5/30/2013 4:36:00 PM not that up on forms not Japanese theirs are 5/7/5 as far as I am aware but what the heck lol, its a poem in its own right. I love the clarity and beauty of it a 7 from me Linda Login to Reply

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